To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Midnight's Marriage"Poems by Michael
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Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
reconciled: This is fine writing and I totally enjoyed the read so much! I love free verse, but do have a time with it. You make the words seem to easily fall from the pen you hold and write so tenderly and smoothly. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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reconciled: This is fine writing and I totally enjoyed the read so much! I love free verse, but do have a time with it. You make the words seem to easily fall from the pen you hold and write so tenderly and smoothly. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hi Sue...-smile-
ha...well thank you. me too...I don't function as free in structured verse. I believe it was designed to drive normal people crazy. Home school your children sue...its not the same world we grew up in I'm afraid...hold me. haha love Michael
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Michael...yes, it is a very scary world we live in today. I fear for all the children who are missing that warm and safe feeling we had when we were children. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment from RGstar
And how I missed this?
So beautiful and full of imagery. Almost dreamlike...the phoenix through a mist.
Your serenity through writes is a craft, and long may it be so.
Bravo.
Keep churning, my brother.
RG
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
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And how I missed this?
So beautiful and full of imagery. Almost dreamlike...the phoenix through a mist.
Your serenity through writes is a craft, and long may it be so.
Bravo.
Keep churning, my brother.
RG
Comment Written 15-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
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haha...-smile-...thank you Bro.
you honor me with your support. Always appreciative when Poetry nods my way. Big love to you...Michael
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Deserved, my brother
Comment from michaelcahill
Beautiful imagery, wow, there has to be better ways to praise this than that. Transplendant and trandslucent splendourous images, yes. I loved this. So ethereal and lovely. Dawn, yes. Music, perfect. Yep, good stuff. mikey
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Beautiful imagery, wow, there has to be better ways to praise this than that. Transplendant and trandslucent splendourous images, yes. I loved this. So ethereal and lovely. Dawn, yes. Music, perfect. Yep, good stuff. mikey
Comment Written 16-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Hey hey Man...I read your Baptist church experience...and I had sever headaches, surreal flash backs...there's one...IN COMING!...cross your arms men....shwwooo close one huh...yea I met that uh sexually repressed voodoo doll myself...along with several other "followers" of the completely sexually humped up in the head. Its a real cost breaking away...I mean if they don't sacrifice you first to the god of damn they wont comply...you still leave the remains of trust and some innocence lost.....any way it was kinda too close right now. thamk you Bro....appreciate you man. love ya Michael
Comment from NicciFaye
"Into you air I will be tomorrow"...."measured with forever"....
When I come to this place....your space....I feel like I can dance whimsically and freely in a place of absolute peace. Letting the rhythm and words carry my inner thoughts along a shore of mystic imagination. This place, when it's like this, is wonderful...
Thank you for sharing this place...
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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"Into you air I will be tomorrow"...."measured with forever"....
When I come to this place....your space....I feel like I can dance whimsically and freely in a place of absolute peace. Letting the rhythm and words carry my inner thoughts along a shore of mystic imagination. This place, when it's like this, is wonderful...
Thank you for sharing this place...
Comment Written 15-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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if I didn't create this sanctuary.
If I didn't protect it holy.
I'd lose me completely...-smile-
you're always welcome Nic...I trust you. love michael
Comment from Ronni
Hello Michael,
Truly a most cerebral reflection; perpetual invitation of your
yearnings and infusing taunting emotions of feelings that
merge a continual, incessantly reverberating anticipation.
Seems Midnight's marriage to dawn is a metaphoric kind
of proposal amidst a galaxy of dreams and a lonely loves
too often dashed hopes and an unabridgeable reality, yet
your love echoes still through the voice of your all the more
ardent soul; enticing almost seducing it to somehow still come true. someway, somewhere, somehow.
Evocative and intensely emotional is the theme of
musical video that so profoundly summarizes your constant
journey and quest of this love in your own tenderly abiding
verse and the simple but unalterable plea. in battling all
the storms of so much turmoil, asks only that loved one love
'leave the light on' till you arrive.
Truly 'awesome' poem and the poet who has always been
no less 'awesome always!
Thanks for sharing..never loose that tenacious 'smile'
love, blessings, Ronni
P.S. Hope go it close enough, you don't make it easy..LO!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hello Michael,
Truly a most cerebral reflection; perpetual invitation of your
yearnings and infusing taunting emotions of feelings that
merge a continual, incessantly reverberating anticipation.
Seems Midnight's marriage to dawn is a metaphoric kind
of proposal amidst a galaxy of dreams and a lonely loves
too often dashed hopes and an unabridgeable reality, yet
your love echoes still through the voice of your all the more
ardent soul; enticing almost seducing it to somehow still come true. someway, somewhere, somehow.
Evocative and intensely emotional is the theme of
musical video that so profoundly summarizes your constant
journey and quest of this love in your own tenderly abiding
verse and the simple but unalterable plea. in battling all
the storms of so much turmoil, asks only that loved one love
'leave the light on' till you arrive.
Truly 'awesome' poem and the poet who has always been
no less 'awesome always!
Thanks for sharing..never loose that tenacious 'smile'
love, blessings, Ronni
P.S. Hope go it close enough, you don't make it easy..LO!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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yes.........my hearts desire finds her way into most my writes. sometimes there my prayers. Hello Wonderful...-bigsmile-....ya know it always surprises me the tingle the nibbles the back of my neck when you say my name. O you could never get too close....love you Michael
Comment from Gloria ....
Always beautiful symbolism from you Michael. I would presume this is the marriage of night to day or midnight to dawn as you suggest or pupa to complete metamorphosis.
As always an introspective and thoughtful write from your pen. :)) Beautiful like the butterfly.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Always beautiful symbolism from you Michael. I would presume this is the marriage of night to day or midnight to dawn as you suggest or pupa to complete metamorphosis.
As always an introspective and thoughtful write from your pen. :)) Beautiful like the butterfly.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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woo woo...Hey G -smile-
yes, its a lil' that mixed with me...tends to throw some for loop. I've learned to accept it and purchase insurance. ..-smile- hope you're well Dear. love ya michael
Comment from santanajr66
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with all of us. Nicely done. Take care and keep on writing . God bless you and your pen.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts with all of us. Nicely done. Take care and keep on writing . God bless you and your pen.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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well victory races in my vains with blood with you waving my banner behind me...will be pointed out as the weaker garrison and attacked first...hope you said you're prayers today kid.......here they come....love Michael
Comment from royowen
"Look up your redemption draws nigh" l think the time is drawing very close to the time of the Lord's return Michael, I love this one, creation groans like a mother in labour, you've contained them all so beautifully magnificent work. my friend, I commend you, blessings, bro, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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"Look up your redemption draws nigh" l think the time is drawing very close to the time of the Lord's return Michael, I love this one, creation groans like a mother in labour, you've contained them all so beautifully magnificent work. my friend, I commend you, blessings, bro, Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hi Roy...-smile-
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o shoot...i hate when that happens....ah thank you sir....appreciate you enjoying. love Michael
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Most welcome
Comment from Nika2016
The first adage of a rock star is to never display your true love to your fans. This is a slippery slope, as feeling is what you want them to feel, but as you see here, fidelity is fickle. Do not sacrifice yourself to love. Midnight comes so swiftly..Perhaps..she waits..elsewhere...
In the deep?....beautiful symbolism.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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The first adage of a rock star is to never display your true love to your fans. This is a slippery slope, as feeling is what you want them to feel, but as you see here, fidelity is fickle. Do not sacrifice yourself to love. Midnight comes so swiftly..Perhaps..she waits..elsewhere...
In the deep?....beautiful symbolism.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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well I dont know Millie and vanillie got caught doing that shit...I'm suprised they made it out of the silverdome alive.....-smile-....a rock star who fakes it....is found out very quickly...lets face it.....ah I'm used to the love or lack thereof....-smile-.....yea, you never know until it finds you. Why I thank you for your advice and the word "beautiful"....love Michael
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Millie Vanilli...takes me back awhile to laughter...hey..they looked good. Not sure Brittney Spears isnt a sock puppet, too after she lip-synched her entire Circus?tour. Writing from phone. Mistakes.
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Sync..can't spell it.ha
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yes but we know she's all but fake...after all we've seen her entire anatomy naked and afraid...doped up and drunk...been through her divorces, pregnancy's and baby's names...she's like the bad stepchild now...every ones kind of ashamed of....because we needed to see everything.....and once we do...-handtwirl-...next! I'm telling you its a struggle to do right...people are at their basic evil....that's why we went to the coliseums to watch men be eaten by lions. Anyway....Brinty's pissed now...you see the way she looks at me...or anybody else. love-
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Speak for yourself, I would never watch a man being devoured by a lion
People are not intrinsically evil. The just receive bad advice and treatment from charlatans and learn through example. Hugs to all of those who fall at someone else's hands. War is the worst instigator. Bye..before I really get started. Smile.
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From a distance now. Shine on.
Comment from Ricky1024
For I am As I am...
As I will be...
Forever a gallery be..
Not As a butterfly..
Nor as me...
For I am whom I am...
Just a simple of man...
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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For I am As I am...
As I will be...
Forever a gallery be..
Not As a butterfly..
Nor as me...
For I am whom I am...
Just a simple of man...
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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exactly...there are men who find meat within themselves...and a simple man is but a yearning for...one has never been born....-smile- thank you sir ricky....love Michael
