Little Poems
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Comment from Dr. Nad
There you go again, taking a beautiful picture and creating another masterpiece! Turtle Tree is another one of those poems that has restrictions and requirements that limit the readability and flow for the average writer. However, for you, it's just another Sunday afternoon walk in the park. LOL May God bless you!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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There you go again, taking a beautiful picture and creating another masterpiece! Turtle Tree is another one of those poems that has restrictions and requirements that limit the readability and flow for the average writer. However, for you, it's just another Sunday afternoon walk in the park. LOL May God bless you!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Thank you Dr. Nad. Glad you can enjoy this gift that God has given me.
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from patcelaw
This is an amazing photo for which you wrote the poem. You did a great job on the poem and it reads very well. It is starting to get warm here, so my back is beginning to feel better. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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This is an amazing photo for which you wrote the poem. You did a great job on the poem and it reads very well. It is starting to get warm here, so my back is beginning to feel better. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Thank you Patricia. I am p,eased to hear that your back is getting better. Peace to you, and your back.
Comment from debskatz
Hi Treischel,
Really cool poem! I think you handled a difficult form very well. I like how the turtle has captured the imagination in your poem, which they do for me also. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing it with us!!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hi Treischel,
Really cool poem! I think you handled a difficult form very well. I like how the turtle has captured the imagination in your poem, which they do for me also. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing it with us!!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thank you Deb. Turtles are very interesting. Although, I try to avoid the snappers.
Comment from Douglas Paul
Your authors note were interesting and helpful. This looks like a complex form but you did it very well. Your picture is amaing and I can see why it inspired this verse. The verse flows well. An enjoyable read
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Your authors note were interesting and helpful. This looks like a complex form but you did it very well. Your picture is amaing and I can see why it inspired this verse. The verse flows well. An enjoyable read
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thank you Douglas for the review and the compliment.
Comment from foxangie123
The tree stumps or driftwood you have found are amazing, wow. I love turtles and this looks just like one. What a miracle or stunning amazement from God. Great writing too.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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The tree stumps or driftwood you have found are amazing, wow. I love turtles and this looks just like one. What a miracle or stunning amazement from God. Great writing too.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thank you foxangie. It is amazing what you can find and imagine. Actually, I didn't notice it until my wife pointed it out to me.
