Death's Devious Knock on the Door
The Death comes on the destined day either in a natural way26 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
Dear writer, I enjoyed this and where did it six stars because of its believability, the Easy Exchange between the subjects, and the fact that it points toward a couple of things which the reader may not have to take into consideration. 1 the fact that death can be natural or patient to the fact that death can be something that occurs when it's intended to or before its intended to. All of this invites the reader to consider the shortness of time that we spend here, and the fact that death is always at our door. As an anthropologist, Carlos Castaneda, who became an apprentice of a yaqui Indian brujo sorcerer Don Juan, learn that death is always just over our shoulder waiting to connect with us. This is an infinitely finite point in time which can be finitely infinite if you'll Pardon The Interchange, extrapolation, binary Concepts spread out to me more than just two ways. I'm glad I happened upon this, you seem to have a knack for writing all time best I wanted to choose one that had not been chosen yet hopefully this will help tip the scale.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Dear writer, I enjoyed this and where did it six stars because of its believability, the Easy Exchange between the subjects, and the fact that it points toward a couple of things which the reader may not have to take into consideration. 1 the fact that death can be natural or patient to the fact that death can be something that occurs when it's intended to or before its intended to. All of this invites the reader to consider the shortness of time that we spend here, and the fact that death is always at our door. As an anthropologist, Carlos Castaneda, who became an apprentice of a yaqui Indian brujo sorcerer Don Juan, learn that death is always just over our shoulder waiting to connect with us. This is an infinitely finite point in time which can be finitely infinite if you'll Pardon The Interchange, extrapolation, binary Concepts spread out to me more than just two ways. I'm glad I happened upon this, you seem to have a knack for writing all time best I wanted to choose one that had not been chosen yet hopefully this will help tip the scale.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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WOW! Dear Badger.
What a pleasant surprise this is!
Please accept my heartfelt THANKS for such a DETAILED, SPLENDID and MORALE BOOSTING Review backed by 5 + 1 Sparkling STAR.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Thanks so much his as your warm reply was also ice a nice gesture
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess we never really know anyone's true intentions in life, we can only hope their heart is good and judge by the results of their actions. Thank you for sharing your touching story. I am truly sorry for the loss of your dear Suni. Great writing, and good luck. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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I guess we never really know anyone's true intentions in life, we can only hope their heart is good and judge by the results of their actions. Thank you for sharing your touching story. I am truly sorry for the loss of your dear Suni. Great writing, and good luck. :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Hello Ric Myworld,
Thank you very much for your thoughtful, heart-touching, encouraging comments and Good Luck wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~RP.
Comment from Mabaker
A strange story, or rather strangely written. I found it difficult to read and parts I had to reread. Some of your wording made it difficult. But it was interesting. Regards Mabaker.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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A strange story, or rather strangely written. I found it difficult to read and parts I had to reread. Some of your wording made it difficult. But it was interesting. Regards Mabaker.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thank you.
Comment from Pyrrho
I got lost in the second sentence of paragraph six. Break in into smaller sentences.
I apologize. I got bored with the content and practiced speed-reading for the last 3/4 of your vignette. I award five stars, but the content does not justify the length or the time required to read and assess.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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I got lost in the second sentence of paragraph six. Break in into smaller sentences.
I apologize. I got bored with the content and practiced speed-reading for the last 3/4 of your vignette. I award five stars, but the content does not justify the length or the time required to read and assess.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thank you for the comments and Excellent Rating.
Comment from Stephanie Kastner
A tragic story of deceit and sometimes triumph, written in a very poetic style. I am sorry you lost your Suni. She seemed to be your sunshine. (And others as well.)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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A tragic story of deceit and sometimes triumph, written in a very poetic style. I am sorry you lost your Suni. She seemed to be your sunshine. (And others as well.)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hello Stephanie Kastner,
Thank you very much for your heart-touching comments and Excellent Rating.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from c_lucas
Some are unfortunate to have relatives that want to help you and do not understand what is going on. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Some are unfortunate to have relatives that want to help you and do not understand what is going on. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hello C_Lucas,
Thank you very much your so thoughtful, encouraging comments, Excellent Rating and Good Luck wishes.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from Annette Gulliver
A sad story of family life, when members can't agree on things. You had enough worry looking after you sick wife. Death is never welcome when it comes knocking. So sorry for your loss.
good luck in the contest.
Annette
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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A sad story of family life, when members can't agree on things. You had enough worry looking after you sick wife. Death is never welcome when it comes knocking. So sorry for your loss.
good luck in the contest.
Annette
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hello Annette Gulliver,
Thank you very much for your heart-touching, encouraging comments, Excellent Rating and Good Luck wishes.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
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You are welcome
Comment from Wabigoon
RP--
A little bit hard to follow this story. Maybe that is the Indian cultural thing which is a bit difficult, or maybe something else -- not sure.
It is a sad story and yet, you relate it in the context of extremely complex family matters making it hard to concentrate on Suni's condition, trouble.
However, it is also interesting because of these cultural differences. Here are a couple of minor problems:
day either in a natural way or in () contrary to it. -- or in a way contrary. Or, simply "contrary to it."
loss during this one-and-a half month(s) period -- don't need the "s" here I don't think.
Thanks, interesting story and I'm sorry it has such a sad ending.
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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RP--
A little bit hard to follow this story. Maybe that is the Indian cultural thing which is a bit difficult, or maybe something else -- not sure.
It is a sad story and yet, you relate it in the context of extremely complex family matters making it hard to concentrate on Suni's condition, trouble.
However, it is also interesting because of these cultural differences. Here are a couple of minor problems:
day either in a natural way or in () contrary to it. -- or in a way contrary. Or, simply "contrary to it."
loss during this one-and-a half month(s) period -- don't need the "s" here I don't think.
Thanks, interesting story and I'm sorry it has such a sad ending.
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hello Wabigoon,
Thank you very much for your heart-touching, encouraging comments, worth following suggestions and Excellent Rating.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very well written and introspective account of a sad time. I often wonder how much of what comes on around us contributes to our overall well-being and health. death comes to us all but do we court it or is it thrust upon us. Can it be hastened or relented?
Good strong piece.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hi there,
This is a very well written and introspective account of a sad time. I often wonder how much of what comes on around us contributes to our overall well-being and health. death comes to us all but do we court it or is it thrust upon us. Can it be hastened or relented?
Good strong piece.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hello Giraffmang,
Thank you very much for your heart-touching, encouraging comments, Excellent Rating and Best wishes.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from chasennov
The Death comes on the destined day either in a natural way. Death's Devious Knock on the Door.' This is a very good account of a personal experience you had. very well done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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The Death comes on the destined day either in a natural way. Death's Devious Knock on the Door.' This is a very good account of a personal experience you had. very well done.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Hello Chasennov,
Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and Excellent Rating.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
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You are most welcome, my friend. I wish you a very enjoyable weekend as well.
