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Little White Lies

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Comment from Realist101
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Hi Mike...sounds like you have a great relationship with your better half. :) I'm glad and really enjoyed this fun essay. Coming from a man's POV it's so interesting to me. The banter you describe is hilarious. And you make good points here too. Nice work! Susan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016
    Glad you liked this. It was fun to remember and write. Thank you, mikey
Comment from lightink
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Mikey, Mikey, Mikey! You crack me up!
Or your ex? "I'm robbing the grave!" Now, that's memorable!
Also, your 'young lady' example is priceless!
Yep, young souls - bad wrinkle cream! ;)
Actually I don't think your hilarious response was a white lie - it was an omission...
I think my preferred ending to this funny piece would be
"Say same white lies that reflect a deeper truth - it makes a better world"
But that's just me! It's a fun piece with a lot of good thoughts in it!

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016
    Thank you, thank you, thank you. That is my new ending and I changed it the second I read it. It's just perfect!!
    I'm so pleased you liked this. "Robbing the grave" was timed so perfectly I'm still laughing years later. She was a scream. We scared people to death. HAHAHA.
    The muscle/fat conversation happened yesterday. We almost got kicked out of Dennys for laughing. Thanks so much. mikey
reply by lightink on 04-Mar-2016
    I am so honored that you found this line worthy! But gosh! I'm envious for that big laughter at lunch! As a stay home mom, I miss that! Even though my son cracks me up a lot! :)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016
    It's our first time out in years, seriously. Out boss, so-called, took us to Denny's for lunch. I just howled with laughter cause she's one who asks me about EVERYTHING, make-up, clothes, you name it. Yep, I know the answers. She doesn't!!! HAhaha. Too funny. mikey
reply by lightink on 04-Mar-2016
    OMG: your boss asks these questions! No way! You must be such a gentle man she thirst for more kindness and ego boisting: LOL!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016
    No, my wife. However, my Boss's wife does too. But, that's another story. HAHAHA!
Comment from DonandVicki
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Yup, it's better to say nothing at all than to get into an argument with an idiot. But if you have to it's better to resort to little white lies.

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016
    Yeps, an unwinnable argument is a waste of time. I don't care if someone thinks they're right, whatever. Ha! Thanks a lot, mikey