Little Poems
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Comment from jdunnsamson
Very tightly composed and polished! You did beautifully what you set out to do in this poem. I loved phrases like: "stacks the masses high in cozy crates" and "density creates a jumbled stew" - powerful, active imagery.
Bravo. I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Very tightly composed and polished! You did beautifully what you set out to do in this poem. I loved phrases like: "stacks the masses high in cozy crates" and "density creates a jumbled stew" - powerful, active imagery.
Bravo. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you jdunnsamson.
Comment from foxangie123
Love it. I as well love that really Kool hotel of a bird house in the front of the picture. This was just fine and dandy like the rest of your enjoyable work.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Love it. I as well love that really Kool hotel of a bird house in the front of the picture. This was just fine and dandy like the rest of your enjoyable work.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you foxangie.
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Always welcome xo
Comment from Dr. Nad
City Dwelling is a very nicely written poem with very tight restraints and an eclectic parameter. The essence of the poem concerning the architecture of city dwelling comes through clearly. And the juxtaposition of man and birds occupying similar styles in close proximity provides a degree of levity as well as enjoyment. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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City Dwelling is a very nicely written poem with very tight restraints and an eclectic parameter. The essence of the poem concerning the architecture of city dwelling comes through clearly. And the juxtaposition of man and birds occupying similar styles in close proximity provides a degree of levity as well as enjoyment. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you Dr. Nad.
You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from TAB_that's me
The bird apartment looks like it is as tall as the buildings but probably just the view point. Is it a martin house?
Lovely poem:)
teresa
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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The bird apartment looks like it is as tall as the buildings but probably just the view point. Is it a martin house?
Lovely poem:)
teresa
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you Teresa. Definitely the angle and perspective. Not sure what is occupying it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. Good job with a difficult format. I like the references you made as stated in your notes. They all fit well into the overall theme of your poem. The picture is super. I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing. [You should have entered this in the contest].
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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I enjoyed your poem. Good job with a difficult format. I like the references you made as stated in your notes. They all fit well into the overall theme of your poem. The picture is super. I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing. [You should have entered this in the contest].
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you Jannypanpan. I don't do well in contests, but thanks for the thought.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well written poem once again. The structure of the buildings is quite unique and from a distance it looks a lot like pigeon holes.
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A very well written poem once again. The structure of the buildings is quite unique and from a distance it looks a lot like pigeon holes.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you Sandra. It sure dies, Lol.
Comment from robyn corum
Tom,
This is one of the best and easiest flowing examples of this poetry form that I've seen. Leave it to you to see the thing one day and complete one immediately afterwards! I don't know how you do it! It's that genius engineer brain, I guess. *smile* Thanks for sharing this one. Makes me see the beauty in the form!
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Tom,
This is one of the best and easiest flowing examples of this poetry form that I've seen. Leave it to you to see the thing one day and complete one immediately afterwards! I don't know how you do it! It's that genius engineer brain, I guess. *smile* Thanks for sharing this one. Makes me see the beauty in the form!
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Thank you Robyn. I appreciate the review and the compliment. I don't know, just a Gid given gift I've always had.
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Correction, God given.
