Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Bob, sorry it's taken me a while to get round to reading your picture challenge poem. I've been out of town and I am way behind in my reviews.
However, I really enjoyed reading your interpretation of the picture challenge. Your poem is fun and expresses a good imaginative story as to how a hole got in the roof of a library. Your end line adds an amusing end to your piece with Harry becoming a cook. Your poem is nicely rhymed and entertaining - very good :-)
My picture challenge poem is now off promotion but I would love to hear your comments on it when you have a mo. Many thanks ~ DD

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016

Thank you for reviewing my response to the challenge. I appreciate your comments

Comment from lightink

Excellent

Hahaha! I'm wondering how the HP fans took your delightfully malicious fun!
It's so entertaining! Especially the way you finished it is priceless! A fast food cook! :D Thank you for the good laugh!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

I'm delighted that you enjoyed my insanity. I don't consider myself a real poet and I believe this proved that opinion

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bob. This IS an amusing take on the photo for this Picture This prompt. A departure from the rest of us decrying the loss of those great old buildings. It brought a smile with my morning cup of coffee. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

After reading a number of the entries I decided to take a lighter approach. I can't compete with the real poets so I opted for nonsense. Glad you enjoyed it

reply by BeasPeas on 04-Mar-2016

Hi Bob. I think that is the trick here. Write whatever pleases us. Diversity is great. Marilyn

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Hi Bob,
What an imagination you have. lol
Funny, you've got it going on here. ;)
I smiled, I admit it...
I had to laugh at the end, though I thought you had messed up her name!

Now he's back with JK
Rolling with her new book
(very cute. ;) rolling a play on her name to the next line. Very nicely done) ;)

I have a suggestion for punctuation... (well, I have a LOT of it, but I"ll only make one, as I see you don't want to punctuate, but I think it's sort of necessary here:

Listen(,) you might agree

(see what I mean?)

Other than that... a delight to read. ;)
nice interpretation.
Cat

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

My hope has been restored. In 18 reviews you're the only one to pick up on my punful (never could spell painful) attempt to get her name into the poem.
I'll employ that comma now. Grammatically I rate about the same level as Hiliary and Donald rate in the sincerity stakes.
Thank you M/s U R Cat.

reply by I am Cat on 03-Mar-2016

lol... It wasn't difficult to spot that, my dear man. ;) At first I thought... He can't spell... And then I noticed the author's notes... ;) lol

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello Bob :)
I love your interpretation of the artwork. So different to all the other 'takes' I've read so far. It really amused me.
I'm sure JK Rowling won't mind you having a little fun with Harry!
Kindest regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank yo Debra. I'm delighted you were amused and you appreciated my irreverent approach.
I must confess I got to the stage where I didn't know how to interpret the photo so I just allowed my insanity
take over

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

This one is the most humorous poem of all the ones I have read so far. It also makes perfectly sense now, that you mention it. Harry is an adventorous guy.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

If only he knew how to control his wand. Glad you saw the intended humour. It was fun to write.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Bob. It seems like you had a lot of fun interpreting this picture. I must admit I have read a lot of these and yours is by far the most extremem and fun at the same time. Blessings. Bob

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Sometimes I have to allow a little madness to escape and this was one of those moments.
Thanks for reading and I'm delighted you shared my stupidity.

Comment from danpald

Excellent

How lovely the poem
Rolls with the theme
Showing the mischievous
Harry Potter in the leaves

Well does the poem show
That wisdom can be fun
When knowing the characters
That act in the way so spun

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank you Dan. I love response that come in poetic form. I really appreciate your reading, your review and your reply

Comment from amada

Exceptional

For heavens sake! I enjoyed this so much. I think I will save it for my grand kids. Wonderful creativity and fresh spark of the imagination. Miss Rowling and Harry are delighted! Great smile here.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

My first ever six star award in these picture challenge fortnightly events. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my fun piece

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

This is quite an original take on the picture. Like the humor and a lot of thought put in. Good rhyme scheme and nice presentation too.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

Thanks frogbook. It was just a piece of nonsense that really came in one flow and at the last moment.