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Comment from Joyce Long
Thank you for you wonderful poem. Jesus is the one we all need in our lives. As a faithful guide He has helped me survive many different problems. There have been times of tears and times of joy. He has been there both times. I am really blessed. Thanks you for sharing.
Joyce 02-27-16
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you for you wonderful poem. Jesus is the one we all need in our lives. As a faithful guide He has helped me survive many different problems. There have been times of tears and times of joy. He has been there both times. I am really blessed. Thanks you for sharing.
Joyce 02-27-16
Comment Written 27-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Loumon
I enjoyed this poem. The message comes through clearly. I'm not certain however,this line had me going back to read it again.
" Tears are a language He understand " should it be . . " Tears are a language He understands.
I believe you were rhyming with command.
A very nice poem with good rhyming scheme .
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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I enjoyed this poem. The message comes through clearly. I'm not certain however,this line had me going back to read it again.
" Tears are a language He understand " should it be . . " Tears are a language He understands.
I believe you were rhyming with command.
A very nice poem with good rhyming scheme .
Comment Written 27-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the review. I went back and made it He understands. Teri
Comment from royowen
Jesus said, if you anybody place in front of me, you're not worthy of me, all these words you use ar true Teri, your beautiful rendition of how Jesus is so very worthy of all the accolades we can sacrificially bestow on Him, well done, my friend, written so well in aabb rhyming, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Jesus said, if you anybody place in front of me, you're not worthy of me, all these words you use ar true Teri, your beautiful rendition of how Jesus is so very worthy of all the accolades we can sacrificially bestow on Him, well done, my friend, written so well in aabb rhyming, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you Roy. hugs, Teri
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Most welcome
Comment from sylvia9
I thought the poem was very good and stayed on point. It grabs your attention and you want to continue to read it. However, I had to get used to the poem with no punctuation. It is easy reading--but without the punctuation--one may have difficulty reading it aloud. But it is an excellent poem that can appeal to all religions.
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I thought the poem was very good and stayed on point. It grabs your attention and you want to continue to read it. However, I had to get used to the poem with no punctuation. It is easy reading--but without the punctuation--one may have difficulty reading it aloud. But it is an excellent poem that can appeal to all religions.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you. Teri
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. this is a beautiful and meaningful poem. I love reading your work it is always wonderfully written and sends such a great message. Thank you for these lovely poems.
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Excellent. this is a beautiful and meaningful poem. I love reading your work it is always wonderfully written and sends such a great message. Thank you for these lovely poems.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the review. Teri
