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Poems and Essays

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Teri. This is a lovely poem of inspiration and encouragement. It made me feel better right from the first stanza:
"When life deals you a heavy blow
Jesus is the one to whom you can go
He will be in your heart and by your side
He will always be your faithful guide"
Marilyn

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
    I like what you wrote! Thanks for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from littlebit69
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I love it, I love it, That is who Jesus is. He will give you a reason to shout! Any bad habits have to cease and desist, gave me something to think about...because I have one habit and that is cigarettes. Reading your poem made me think about what I'm doing to my body. It's so hard to stop, so pray for me. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    Thank you for the review. You are in my prayers. Just hang in there. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Unspoken94
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I have a story in my book called, The Fear of Abandonment, in which the client
came to understand the Christ would never abandon him, even though he would
die alone. This piece reflects that thought. Very well done. -Bill

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
    Thank you Bill for your great review. Teri
Comment from Bryana
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What a lovely poem my friend. A poem of love
and faith, very true He will always be our faithful
guide. He must be number one in our list.
Beautifully written poem, it was a pleasure reading
it this Sunday morning.
Hugs

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016
    Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Teri,

This is a perfect poem of faith that's so uplifting,
well rhymed and I truly enjoyed reading your
talented work here.

I loved each and every one of your stanzas...this
one seemed to stand out to me:

"He is a kind compassionate friend
He will be with you to the very end
When you feel down and out
Jesus will give you a reason to shout"

I also liked your compassionate thoughts here:
"Tears are a language He understands
The broken hearted look for his command"

Very well done on this Teri and I thank you
for sharing it with us,

Linda

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016
    Thank you my friend. This made me smile really big as I work up to the six stars. Hugs, Teri
reply by AnnaLinda on 28-Feb-2016
    Just beautiful and certainly well deserved!
reply by AnnaLinda on 28-Feb-2016
    Certainly, I meant...I pressed save too fast! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016
    you made me smile. hugs, Teri
Comment from heyjude
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Teri, lots of good thoughts here. Yes, He should be number
one at the top of our list. He does understand our pain and
will be there for us and give us His strength.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
    Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for witnessing and offering those in need a little reassurance for when they are lonely and afraid, which we have all been at one time or another, and if not, we surely will be at some point. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
    Thank you for the great review. Teri
Comment from damommy
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I fully understand. Without Him, I would never have made this far through some very serious troubles.

This is a lovely poem, and has an important message for all. Excellent job. Love the photo, too. 8-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Such a heart felt beautiful rhyming poem about Jesus .
I like how you expressed the need for us to know

He is a kind compassionate friend
He will be with you to the very end
When you feel down and out
Jesus will give you a reason to shout


Gert

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
    Thank you Gert. I found this poem in my room today in a book I used to write in. Hugs. Teri
reply by Gert sherwood on 27-Feb-2016
    It's so nice Glad you found it
    Smiles
    Gert
Comment from c_lucas
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Believers have Jesus promise to be there to protect, guide and comfort. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016
    Thank you Charlie for the great review. Hugs, Teri
reply by c_lucas on 27-Feb-2016
    You're welcome, Teri. Charlie