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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from busses
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I enjoyed this poem The contrast off the snow outside and the warm glow of your home exemplifies the words used in this poem. I love the cold and warm feelings I got from both the art and the writing.TY

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016
    Thank you busses.
Comment from Joan E.
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Your house is beautiful, and the snowstorm sets it in a starry fairyland! I can see why you would be inspired to create an Italian sonnet to capture the scene. I enjoyed your octave and sestet and their rhymes, plus the turn. Here's to the "glow"! -Joan

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016
    Thank you Joan. I definitely am glowing. We do enjoy out house.
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Treischel you did a beautiful job writing and presenting this lovely poem. Just stay warm and safe as you snuggle with your sweetheart. Blessings, Patricia

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016
    Thank you Patricia. I'm sorry you don't have one to snuggle with right now, but just think, it won't be much longer and you'll be together again.