Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "There Goes Tomorrow"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
26 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Great work, Brett. This is a lovely well-written poem. I enjoy reading your work as it is simple and easy to understand. Just what I need-simple. LOL
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
  |
Excellent. Great work, Brett. This is a lovely well-written poem. I enjoy reading your work as it is simple and easy to understand. Just what I need-simple. LOL
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Kaydoe
This poem would make a lovely heartfelt song of love, then love lost and hope that she will return again. I hope you can find someone to put it to music.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
|
This poem would make a lovely heartfelt song of love, then love lost and hope that she will return again. I hope you can find someone to put it to music.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
Although, as you say, this is written in freestyle, it flows beautifully. It has a definite musical cadence and your occasional use of rhyme adds definition. I can easily imagine it becoming a very fine song when the right tune develops itself around the words.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
|
Although, as you say, this is written in freestyle, it flows beautifully. It has a definite musical cadence and your occasional use of rhyme adds definition. I can easily imagine it becoming a very fine song when the right tune develops itself around the words.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
This is a true love song. I am sure you will find a great artist to record your work one day if you don't do it yourself. You are a great lyric writer my friend. I enjoy your work. Teri
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
|
This is a true love song. I am sure you will find a great artist to record your work one day if you don't do it yourself. You are a great lyric writer my friend. I enjoy your work. Teri
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
You did a really great job in writing this poem. I loved every word of it.
I am just now getting on here to rate and review the poems that are written.
Hopefully, after taking the rest of my pills I'll be able to start writing again.
Kat
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
|
Hi Brett,
You did a really great job in writing this poem. I loved every word of it.
I am just now getting on here to rate and review the poems that are written.
Hopefully, after taking the rest of my pills I'll be able to start writing again.
Kat
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
-
You always write things nicely.
Comment from MelB
This flowed very well. They say you don't know what you got till it's gone. But, you can always hope that person will come back.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
|
This flowed very well. They say you don't know what you got till it's gone. But, you can always hope that person will come back.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from doggymad
This was a terrific write. I find it hard to tell whether the love is dying or there is a fear that it might.
It is always hard to imagine life without the one you love beside you. A reminder to cherish and nourish what we have
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
|
This was a terrific write. I find it hard to tell whether the love is dying or there is a fear that it might.
It is always hard to imagine life without the one you love beside you. A reminder to cherish and nourish what we have
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Brett,
Although this is not a rhymed poem it flowed very well. It was a very nice comfortable read.
A very sad poem of dying love. Why does that have to happen?
Great
Brenda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
|
Hi Brett,
Although this is not a rhymed poem it flowed very well. It was a very nice comfortable read.
A very sad poem of dying love. Why does that have to happen?
Great
Brenda
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Her love is gone but you cant believe it and refuse to think it is truly over.
You will stay steadfast waiting on her to come to her senses and return to the man she loves.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
|
Her love is gone but you cant believe it and refuse to think it is truly over.
You will stay steadfast waiting on her to come to her senses and return to the man she loves.
Nicely done
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
there goes tomorrow remind me of a movie with that title from where the earth is coming apart the weather is changing hurricanes in Turbo freezing temperatures I think it's called the day of tomorrow or something like that but um it was a nice wonderful movie but you always wonder it away Uman beings are on this planet and in the destructive forces that of them as if tomorrow is never going to be there you know I just thank God everyday that I wake up and have another 24 hours this reviews coming from a lg android phone with Grandma Corazon complete run on sentences thanks 24 24 thi
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
|
there goes tomorrow remind me of a movie with that title from where the earth is coming apart the weather is changing hurricanes in Turbo freezing temperatures I think it's called the day of tomorrow or something like that but um it was a nice wonderful movie but you always wonder it away Uman beings are on this planet and in the destructive forces that of them as if tomorrow is never going to be there you know I just thank God everyday that I wake up and have another 24 hours this reviews coming from a lg android phone with Grandma Corazon complete run on sentences thanks 24 24 thi
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
-
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
