Comment from mountainwriter49

Exceptional

Hi, Shari,

I enjoyed reading this latest chapter in your family history. I admire how you're doing this and the effectiveness of the reads. I feel like I know you and your family!

As I read I had to grab my own leg and just say, OUCH! I could feel the pain your husband endured. As for the quack, I'm hoping to read a future chapter were you went back and shot him.

I detected no SPAGS, but I do have a question about this sentence:

Working together, he managed to pull himself back on the bed. The next day, I bought a urinal!

There seems to be a disconnect with the opening phrase, "working together" and then it's all about how he got into bed. I'm thinking something like this might be more to the point:

[Working together, we managed to pull him back onto the bed...]

-ARay

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016

You're grammatical correction is spot on. Thank you so much, Ray.
Thanks so much for the six. Sorry you felt the pain, but writing wise, it's a good thing. :-)

We tried to sue the doctor, but lawyers are reluctant to take those cases.

reply by mountainwriter49 on 14-Feb-2016

I think more of used car salesmen and Congressmen than I do lawyers, and that's not saying much at all! I love your writing. :)