Comment from MelB

Excellent

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I'm so sorry about the loss of your wife and son. Very gripping words and a very nice tribute! I'm sure she blamed herself, but it was not her fault. Sometimes, accidents do just happen. I hope it has been healing for you to write about it. I cannot imagine going through what you have been through. May God give you comfort, peace, and strength.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016

email before you go back and check for those I didn't realize it was in there and also thanks for your wonderful review and comment on the pain that the person has to go through enable us to specially so true that you cared so much about so close together Ricky 10

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

This did bring a tear to my eyes, before I even read the author notes.
Grief is the most complicated of things we have to face, as it can make us act in all kind of ways.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016

thank CHC Beck for your thoughts on blessed to be an award winning Blue Ribbon piece that's head very very many reviews and very very many people read it in the past week and a half now as it brought a tear to your eyes reading it some of my work when I reflect back to the same thing like any good piece of poetry because you knowand as you know any good piece of poetry when it comes to the mind is exceptional just like for shipments writing he comes in the mind and heart even better I like Stephen King's love for her but if it can come from the mind the heart and soul and if it can be written from above it's so much more a blessing so extremely rare I'm the only one that I've ever read that I can do this out there Mercedes sings in the name of Jesus Christ amen Ricky 10:24

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Although, for me (and I've said this many times) I enjoy poetry if written plain and simple to he read. Maybe my grasp of English isn't like for others, so although I can sense the love and passion here, it comes across as forced not a nice smooth continuous thought. John

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016

it was not enforced about producing is from my mind and my heart and my soul is in it was definitely coming from above as for being hard to read its hard to read is sad and it deserves that and nothing more or nothing less Ricky 10:24

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very nice blessed shall be all the water we are drinking right about now. Great job on these blessings and have a great evening.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

thanks William for your wonderful review this piece of said so many reviews they offered me a blue ribbon for kids are very nice thanks 24 out

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I am so sorry for your loss, and your poem strikes a core in my heart. I've had many losses in my life but never anything that comes close to what you've gone through. May this help you to heal. All the best. Ulla

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

thanks ever so much love for taking the time to read my beautiful poems which I work so hard on dedicated to not only Carol but also Jason when they are both passed away in 2003 Ricky 1

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh dear man, I do pray for you, for what you have endured no one should have to! This is positively heart-wrenching, Ricky, and so very romantic, such lovely, poetic language - well done!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

thanks ever so much. I really respect your opinion and all your work you are an amazing artist hi I hope you can feel some day to see me about my writings even though they're basically drawn together with the grief of my heart the glow of my soul and the warmest of my mind Ricky 10:24

reply by Dawn Munro on 18-Feb-2016

You are most welcome.

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

I am so sorry for your losses; Your poem was written with so much pain and emotion. Through your faith, the grief will subside, but will never pass. As a widower of ten years, I don't think there is a final healing stage. I do hope that you enjoy the time with your daughters and share with them the memories of your wife and son.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

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Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE

Exceptional

Oh! What tragedy you have to share, sandwiched with such love, emotion and faith! I particularly liked the repeats and rising emphasis of this, as well as your notes. It comes with a reminder for me to take my blood pressure pills too, although I would love to see more motivating research as to why for our generation hypertension is such a major epidemic, and how to change this from birth - i.e. what was, is the relationship to cows milk based infant formulas, and limited empowerment of breast feeding.

Thanks, particularly for poem which stir and inspire our humanity, blessings, Maureen*&*

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

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reply by A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE on 20-Feb-2016

And again, courage, strength and happy sharing, Maureen*&*

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a truly fine dedication to your wife
There are no words to express
the sadness and sorrow
One cannot even imagine the pain
""And blessed shall be...
"This Love for Thee...
"For it shall never die..."
I wish you the best
and peace...

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

thank you are so it for your own wonderful reply and review what is your name is mine is Richard and my last name starts with an S is your name Richard or read or is that just our assistance the synonym

Comment from amahra

Excellent

This is totally heart-wrenching to read this. My condolence. I can't say I know what your wife or you feel never having lost a child, but if its anything like losing a grandson to suicide, I can at least say I share your grief first hand. God bless you.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016

yes I am eight hrs the pain would be somewhere to losing your grandchild sometimes we're much closer to grandchildren and we were our children because they been grown up and produced children is been so long since we were in the diapers stage I know I have my all Bri and Alexander both are seven I have my sources who will be 17 in just got a car I have my Derrick or Frederick is about to last Christmas plus I have 4 beautiful daughters so they all give me all the support I need to move forward