Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good story in this poem that most of us can relate to. Many people who are suppose to be professional are far from being what they proclaim to be.

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Thanks Bro from a previous reviewer I gather this won't see the light of any kind of prize. Appreciate you coming through. Fortunately it didn't cost me anything.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Tiling is a bitch and everything depends on precision. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Thanks Bro have a look back through, I hope the nut was not on the assessment committee. Not that expect to win anything I am not one of the chosen few in here.

reply by c_lucas on 11-Feb-2016

You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Ahhh yes, thank God for many things , especially Patience's. I like your poetic verse and I have never met a construction worker that isn't faced with one problem or another on a daily basis.

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Thanks again appreciate another review from you, new friend.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hello Geoff,

I've seen the pictures on Facebook, so I could visualize the unfortunate predicament. Poor Louise, hope things get back to normal quickly, for her sake.
Give her a hug from me, okay?

Lovinia (Deborah) mentioned she'd met you. She's a lovely lady isn't she? We spent a day together when I visited Sydney.

Best wishes for the contest, friend.

Hope you're having a good week (apart from the bathroom woes). :)

Sonali


ming to a job that is nearing (its - apostrophe not required) end

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Yeah thanks always a problem with its versus it's possessive hehe.

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

I fixed its

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Neat free verse piece.
I think everyone has some kind of a story to tell with renovations.
good entry to the contest and I wish you luck.
a fun read.

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Hi barb how do I monitor it? I was not sure I put it in the right place and not even sure it qualifies. thanks for the lovely review.

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 10-Feb-2016

You have it in the right place. It is a free verse and it qualifies perfectly. Since it is a cash prize there is no way to monitor it. The committee votes, not the other poets so we never know till they are done. About three days after it closes

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Thanks

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 10-Feb-2016

anytime I can help...