Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

"For life is love and loving's shaded blue. Awesome alliterations pay tribute to color blue.
Character stating blue is color of life. Used as a metaphor and analogy.
liberty justice

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Thanks so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed this. mike

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Mikey;
-I really like this very superb and well-written piece of poetry you have reached the pinnacle of your writing with this one. Both rhyming and rhythm are done so well that the reading flowed so perfectly.
- you pictures very appropriate and relative to your concept and theme and very complementary to your poem.
- writing is not forced nor labored it very supportive to the meaning and concept of each of your lines.
- that are being pentameter indicators, timing and tempo wall helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Mikey. Also good luck in the contest.
Alex

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

So pleased you enjoyed this one, Alex. Lots of fun to write and a little less difficult than the other one. I'll cross my fingers for the contest. LOL mike

reply by krys123 on 11-Feb-2016

I think you'll do fine in the booths Mike
and you are so very welcome.
Alex

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

LOLOL... and this is what happens when I watch the video FIRST. lol
I'm actually crying... MEOW! lol
oh I do love that show. ;)
love me some improv! too funny.

ok... now.. your "sonnet".. and I use the term loosely. LOL... well, there ARE 14 lines in it... volta? hmmm... not sure about that one. John TRA, perhaps... but... volta? eh... do I care? not really. As I was still lauging. Your meter works for me, and I laughed, even if I was lost like that girl on the barstool who might still be picking that thing out of her ass this morning...

red and blue make purple, which is probably the color of her backside after sitting on that thing. LOL

ummmm good luck in the contest?
I HAVE to call you when I do come to Cali.... because you do crack me up (not like that backside and the barstool, but yeah... you do crack me up) lol

nice one. Houston, we have re-entry!
good luck!
Cat

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

I'm glad I added the video and discovered your true obsession. I plan to win the contest and have my hand raised in a token of victory.
Well, maybe I'll end up in last place and be a good sport. Yeah, that's the plan. Well, I'm sure you copied the embed code for the video. Study hard and try and perk up a little. mike

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

its just you and me Bud....-smile- ...its closing time and that last dime spent on that magic rhyme left reason far behind. I'm afraid all that's left now is the bitter truth...you want to dance...-smile-ah ahaha...Hey Mike....I guess you noticed V-day too huh...? burp....dip...yea its nights like this when grown man could breakdown to cry...okay promenade...,..well we always got each other...I love you man...dip...ahahah....love Michael

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Hey, Michael. Yep, enough to make a grown man cry.
The funny thing is, lots of people got this one. They don't get the ones they should have got but they get the ones that have nothing to get. I think I've got that. I thought I'd see how nothingness was received. About the same. HA!! Love, mike

reply by reconciled on 11-Feb-2016

its because you released it after happy hour....everybody understands alcohols same name....hiccup..-headnod- ...hahaha