Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Life's unexpected turns are what helps us grow and learn. The poem is a very well-written summary of a major struggle in your life, nicely done as always.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thank you for the kind review. I am so far behind with my upcoming move that this is a copy and paste reply. Please forgive me.

reply by Mistydawn on 07-Apr-2018

I hope all is going well. PLEASE don't overdo.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a warm and tranquil write about your acceptance of the past and your clear way to the future Patricia, I enjoyed your story and you are now at peace with yourself, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thank you for the kind review. I am so far behind with my upcoming move that this is a copy and paste reply. Please forgive me.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Share Your Story' writing prompt.
Your story is well told. Sometimes life's twists take us in unexpected ways. I'm glad things worked out for you.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thank you for the kind review. I am so far behind with my upcoming move that this is a copy and paste reply. Please forgive me.

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Well penned with nice artwork. Good luck in the contest. Wonderful comparison to God as our Commander-in-Chief... Nice progression, rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016

Thank you Deb, so much for the nice review.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

An excellent written testimony with its distinct military twist. The aspect of the commander-in-chief was an excellent metaphor for you new one, God himself. Well said.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thanks for the nice review. Part of this was make in a response to a message I received form a man who knows my story.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OH so nicely written and what a witness for God in His way He chose.
He knew back then what kind of person you were,,,and would be.
Very good testimony and very well written. I see no mistakes.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thanks Barb, for the nice review.
Yes, He did know and I am so thankful He was there with me through that difficult time.

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Great job, Patricia with your decision to go with God's commandments and go for life, a precious life that He has blessed you with in later years because you followed Him even through great trials and tribulation. Your strong faith is to be admired for He is an awesome and loving God! Great life story and entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thanks for the nice review. I am a soldier in God's army and I must do as He commands.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

An touching spiritual story that keeps the readers attention throughout the story. Your passion for God shines through this well constructed piece

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thanks for the nice review, Don and Vicki.

Comment from GE Parson

Exceptional

TREMENDOUS! SUPERMENDOUS! AWSOME!
Am very impressed with your algory[?] illustration of the physical to the spiritual; espc.."that day I will keep my uniform of forgiveness on, having my feet shod with the preparation of the gospel of peace and keep my shield of faith at the ready, so I may stay in step with His commands."

Hope you win the contest
Brother Jerry

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016

Thanks Jerry for the wonderful review. I appreciate you comment.

Comment from William Ross

Exceptional

This is great I'm giving 6 stars on this wonderful piece. God bless you, A wonderful woman and person. Good luck and have a wonderful evening.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016

Thanks William, for the lovely six star review.. Blessings.