Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "The Jungle"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Diana Charles
That was really compelling! Your writing put me right in the midst of the jungle! Great work! I can't wait to read more. I'm loving this site and reading everyone's work.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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That was really compelling! Your writing put me right in the midst of the jungle! Great work! I can't wait to read more. I'm loving this site and reading everyone's work.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from James Upshaw
This is a very creative poem. I almost feel like I would have to sit down and have a conversation with you in order to understand it. The arrangement of phrases is so unnatural, but perhaps you intended it to be that way. I am curious to know if that is the case. It seems like it might be intentionally set up that way.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is a very creative poem. I almost feel like I would have to sit down and have a conversation with you in order to understand it. The arrangement of phrases is so unnatural, but perhaps you intended it to be that way. I am curious to know if that is the case. It seems like it might be intentionally set up that way.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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No pure fact illiterate, suffering proper grammar placement, getting a kick out of what is called proper expression. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from AdaJulie
This is a very cool writing style that you have displayed here. Very entertaining. Nice job! Keep up the creative works. I like it. Uniquely designed.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is a very cool writing style that you have displayed here. Very entertaining. Nice job! Keep up the creative works. I like it. Uniquely designed.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Earl Corp
Very Cool twist, having the jungle being all in one's own mind. I can relate to this because we all make our own jungles or prisons in our minds. Nice job.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Very Cool twist, having the jungle being all in one's own mind. I can relate to this because we all make our own jungles or prisons in our minds. Nice job.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Yes we do, feeling aspects of its various creatures under their endurances, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Christine Wissner
Very interesting. I love a story involving animals. This is great. It tells the perils of the jungle and how death lurks around every corner. Fear of being eaten alive has to be with them every moment of every day. Nice story. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Very interesting. I love a story involving animals. This is great. It tells the perils of the jungle and how death lurks around every corner. Fear of being eaten alive has to be with them every moment of every day. Nice story. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Glad aspects in this story were found captivating to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from kiwijenny
Predators teeth of death in waits to kill,
blur sudden will at life an unfortunate,
drain evening thrill fright to feel on you
The disjointed words adds suspense and foreboding.
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Predators teeth of death in waits to kill,
blur sudden will at life an unfortunate,
drain evening thrill fright to feel on you
The disjointed words adds suspense and foreboding.
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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I think that's a nice way to define my writes, pleased certain aspects were captivating to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- the jungle is certainly a dangerous place...and your equating it to the realm of the mind here is very interesting and even intriguing ... the predator, the prey....great job! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Wow -- the jungle is certainly a dangerous place...and your equating it to the realm of the mind here is very interesting and even intriguing ... the predator, the prey....great job! ;)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
We act and play endurance in the course of our survival but everything is under the control of mind where all imagination grows and rests for action; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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We act and play endurance in the course of our survival but everything is under the control of mind where all imagination grows and rests for action; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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I missed your input, pleased that you are well, thanking you for your generous rate and touching sentiments.
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, with imagination we rise above our daily horrors. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, TPAC. I like your style..................meeshu
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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You have created some great images here, with imagination we rise above our daily horrors. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, TPAC. I like your style..................meeshu
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I admire your style as well, given comments have closed the gap between my writes and readers. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Cherubel
I can gather the frights of a jungle and how it maybe can be a place in your mind and the way it feels to be alone and afraid. Hunger can turn you in to a predator or prey.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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I can gather the frights of a jungle and how it maybe can be a place in your mind and the way it feels to be alone and afraid. Hunger can turn you in to a predator or prey.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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At least the drama was captured, needing apparently to define sequence of events, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
