Guess Who????
A bit of fun26 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
For us Americans, the right wing is our best chance of winning. They are
their own worst enemy. I chose this out of your portfolio because it needed
one more review to be sent to the highest standard of recognition. Not
any more. -Bill
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
For us Americans, the right wing is our best chance of winning. They are
their own worst enemy. I chose this out of your portfolio because it needed
one more review to be sent to the highest standard of recognition. Not
any more. -Bill
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
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Thanks bill hope all is well.
Jim
Comment from c_lucas
The king's thoughts
were right wing;
The queen's left.
Never met in the middle.
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A piece of fun and very good writing. This is well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
The king's thoughts
were right wing;
The queen's left.
Never met in the middle.
***
A piece of fun and very good writing. This is well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thanks for your review It pleases me that you had fun.
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You're welcome.
Comment from lightink
His Royal Trumpness? Yes, he'll try and we will sure do whatever it takes to prevent it... Mostly, well placed votes and poetry! Good 1-6-1 poem!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
His Royal Trumpness? Yes, he'll try and we will sure do whatever it takes to prevent it... Mostly, well placed votes and poetry! Good 1-6-1 poem!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Could be trump could be crus could be Christy more bad news. LIERS LOSERS LEAKERS TRASH DESTROYING FREEDOM VERY FAST. THEY ALL SUCK ALL. Thanks for the read
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Anonymous :)
Good job with the syllable count and following the rules of the contest. I don't like the right-wing political party, but I think you are kidding. Good job!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
Hello, Anonymous :)
Good job with the syllable count and following the rules of the contest. I don't like the right-wing political party, but I think you are kidding. Good job!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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So many people got wound up in the politics of this. What drove the verse was the only rhyme that flowed well with two rhyming words together wing and king so I developed the verse around "right wing king" I thought it would be fun to let people pick who. a lot of folks guessed -- problem is I have no answer. Just a bit of fun
Comment from Douglas Paul
I can hear the Trumpets playing now. The music is grating on my ears. Very well done and you captured his essence. Scary
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
I can hear the Trumpets playing now. The music is grating on my ears. Very well done and you captured his essence. Scary
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thanks for the read
Comment from flylikeaneagle
If you are talking about TRUMP, ok, he got all the attention! Press, people and promotions for free. I hope that he helps the vets with his money. Fun poem!
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
If you are talking about TRUMP, ok, he got all the attention! Press, people and promotions for free. I hope that he helps the vets with his money. Fun poem!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Glad you had a bit of fun. I hope somebody helps the vets. This poor treatment of vets has gone on since GW' army. Thoes poor guys did not even get paid. it really sucks. Thanks for the read
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent rhymes, and you're obviously referring to Donald of the straw hair, who is getting more than his fair share of publicity, even on 'fanstory' with so many (usually derogatory) remarks/writes about him.
However, with respect, I don't see this poem saying anything apart from he is 'right wing' and loves the limelight ('bring him on'), which we all know.
Maybe you're saying he is 'King' of the extremist loonie right wing brigade, even more important than the Republican candidates of the same hidden agenda, perhaps.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
Excellent rhymes, and you're obviously referring to Donald of the straw hair, who is getting more than his fair share of publicity, even on 'fanstory' with so many (usually derogatory) remarks/writes about him.
However, with respect, I don't see this poem saying anything apart from he is 'right wing' and loves the limelight ('bring him on'), which we all know.
Maybe you're saying he is 'King' of the extremist loonie right wing brigade, even more important than the Republican candidates of the same hidden agenda, perhaps.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Ray you take this far to serious. The challenge of this 1-6-1contest was to have all three lines rhyme. The only rhyming two words I could think of that fit together were wing an king. That drove the poem. I did not put a name because I really don't have a preference and wanted to evoke some thought; make it interesting. Your reply is terrific an I am pleased to read it. six syllables wound you up to reply with about 150 syllables. Making folks wheels turn is what we write for. Thanks for the great reaction.
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I don't take much 'seriously' in life at all. EXCEPT perhaps when I'm being nit-picky in reviews. ;-)
I always try to think and offer the writer respect, and when I review I try to incorporate wit or constructive critique if I see fit, or at least assure the writer I've read the bloody thing. ;-).
I don't think I can be accused of dishing out un-due compliments or fluff reviews just to gain the cents and climb the reviewer rankings, like MANY on here.
Right - now where's some haiku so I can pretend the 'original' imagery of a tapestry of autumn leaves on the floor made me dizzy with wonderment? ;-)
Cheers, Ray
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Ray
Your reviews are the best. And over the years you have helped me quite a bit. When I have a bunch of reviews I check to see if yours is there and read it first. Hope I did not say something to upset you. Jax
I get it about the Haiku.. I am beginning to think they are for elitist. Thanks again
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Thanks for the wonderful compliment.
I'm extremely hard to upset long-term, though I sometimes react with an unfair knee-jerk til I see the error of my ways. ;-)
I certainly WASN'T upset on this occasion, and it also gave me a chance to 'blow my own trumpet', LOL, and thanks for the great reply.
Ray
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Yoga an. Thanks jim
Comment from Connie C
I'm guessing this will get lots of votes. I'm assuming you are referring to the Donald--very clever little poem.
My best to you in the contest.
Connie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
I'm guessing this will get lots of votes. I'm assuming you are referring to the Donald--very clever little poem.
My best to you in the contest.
Connie
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thanks for the read, comment and good wishes
Comment from Drew Delaney
Wow! No pictures or name attached. Very unusual. This is quite cute. Makes me hungry for some hot Buffalo wings. Never mind, and a glass of wine with that order, please. LOL
Nice job! Drew
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
Wow! No pictures or name attached. Very unusual. This is quite cute. Makes me hungry for some hot Buffalo wings. Never mind, and a glass of wine with that order, please. LOL
Nice job! Drew
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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You gave me a great big smile.. Me Too Beer with my wings. Thanks for the read and comment
Comment from I am Cat
Please tell me you aren't calling Trump 'awesome'... LOL
or a KING... though he'd like to be.
I have a few words for him:
bully
racist
sexist
and pretty much all the other words which end in 'ist'...
but... other than that.... I like your 1-6-1
it meets all the requirements of the contest Jimmy
well done.
I still loves ya, even if you support that yahoo. LOL
mwah
C
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
Please tell me you aren't calling Trump 'awesome'... LOL
or a KING... though he'd like to be.
I have a few words for him:
bully
racist
sexist
and pretty much all the other words which end in 'ist'...
but... other than that.... I like your 1-6-1
it meets all the requirements of the contest Jimmy
well done.
I still loves ya, even if you support that yahoo. LOL
mwah
C
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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This was a tough write The only two words that I could think of that rhymed together were wing and king. and that drove the poem. Through in a little politics and I knew lots of folks would get worked. So many people thought I was talking about Trump but it was all about evoking thought.. Thats what we for to evoke thought. I don't know who I will support. this is a hell of a race. I think all politicians are greedy bastard out for themselves.
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I think you're right.. ;) on all counts... It's great to see you. ;)
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Read what makes you cry.. I wrote it a long time ago. It makes the point about poems evoking thought and not being personae experience. Believe me I did not play with dolly at least toy ones. You too
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I'll read it. ;)