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Comment from nancyjam
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This is a beautiful testament to a loving marriage
in Alphabet poem form.
Each line shows the love you have for your
husband and his for you.
I wish you the best in the contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Nancy, many thanks for reading and reviewing my Love poem for this contest. I enjoyed writing this and Yes we have a great connection and love no other Cheers
Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Poem! This is a beautiful love poem. The author's words are strong,
clear and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and compliments the
words and theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Harmony13, I thank you most sincerely for your time and review and lovely words for this composition. Idid spend some time trying to get it right and glad you thought it beautiful and thought provoking Many Cheers to you
Comment from Cheryl9359
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This is a great ABC poem. You did amazing! I just recently wrote one of these myself and it is in the form of a letter as well! I hope you enter this in the contest I'm sure you'll do great!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Cheryl, Wow I am so thrilled with your lovely Six star review and glad I put on the site. win lose or draw I am blessed anyway. A big thank you and many Cheers to you 😃
Comment from Judvan2
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Wow, all 26 letters, amazing. I wrote for this contest but couldn't do that! Its amazing that after 40 years you have all these wonderful things to say. I think that's the way it should be, grow more in love the better we know someone. I guess not everyone is capable of that. Thanks for writing this loving, hopeful sweet poem for your husband!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Judvan2 . Thank you for reading and reviewing my entry for this contest, and I guess 40 years gives one much to write about and appreciate. I enjoyed composing this and I will look forward to reading yours too . Many Cheers
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your choice of the Alphabet form for the Love Poem Contest--quite a challenge, which you managed so well. Your "X, Y, Z" choices are appealing, along with your selection of the "calm," "hero" and "king" describers, plus your rhymes. Speaking in the first person adds to the immediacy of your verse--I hope it is autobiographical. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Joan, yes it was a challenge and yes it is autobiographical, I will keep him he indulges me and is always supportive. had fun with the letters and hoped they all worked in Much appreciation for your review and best wishes Cheers
reply by Joan E. on 27-Jan-2016
    I'm keeping mine too after forty-five years! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Yes we have then just how we want them LOL Smiles Christine
reply by Joan E. on 27-Jan-2016
    Your secret is safe with me. More, knowing smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    😄😄😄
Comment from foxangie123
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This is unique and brilliant. The reader can feel your passion along with the warmth of truth in love. It truly is lovely. Awesome.....

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi foxieangie123. Wow what a lovely review and I am so glad you liked this and thought it awesome. The subject has much meaning for me and once I started it just seemed to flow out. Many Cheers my friend Christine😃
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

What a fantastically well worked poem. Very clever and quite an achievement to do it with the entire alphabet. My only little nit is that x-ray is spelt with a hyphen, otherwise it is x ray or X ray!
All the best
G

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi G and thanks for that helpful tip I will correct ASAP. I am glad this worked and appreciate you time to read and leave me a feedback Cheers Christine😀
Comment from William Ross
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Very good and very well written a beautiful love poem. lots of good rhyming a great flow when read. Great job and good luck. have a great day.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi William, Thank hou very much for reading and reviewing my 'Love poem'. I was unsure how this would read but glad for your encouraging words. You also have a great day. Many Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Chrissy - this is amazing. Every letter of the alphabet and rhyming couplets all the way through. What's more your words are good. The whole does not sound at all contrived in order to have success with each letter. It works well - quite an achievement. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi Dorothy, Many thanks for your review and lovely words for my poem for this contest. I am glad you thought it worked well. Your support and good luck wishes are greatly appreciated x Cheers Christine 😃
Comment from MacMhuirich
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Beautiful and clever, love the idea of an alphabet love poem, very creative. Wonderful rhyme and flow all the way through, nice imagery. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Hi John, I enjoyed doing this one and so glad your thought it creative. It took me a while to get it 'right' and Your best wishes are much appreciated. I have a good husband. Cheers Christine😃