Animated Stills
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Rose Within a Stone"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting object and a great poetry prompt.
The Octrain with refrain format is mastered well.
An informative and well crafted poem which draws one to
believe this may be true.
Clever you.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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An interesting object and a great poetry prompt.
The Octrain with refrain format is mastered well.
An informative and well crafted poem which draws one to
believe this may be true.
Clever you.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 25-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thank you Shirley, you never know.
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for sharing another Animated Still--I could see the rose and its stem, once you called my attention to them. I enjoyed the alternating rhymes in your Octaves and the repeats. Your comparison to a "laser" and the Ten Commandments is quite effective, along with the "rune" simile. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thanks for sharing another Animated Still--I could see the rose and its stem, once you called my attention to them. I enjoyed the alternating rhymes in your Octaves and the repeats. Your comparison to a "laser" and the Ten Commandments is quite effective, along with the "rune" simile. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thank you Joan. For a wonderful review and assessment.
Comment from IndianaIrish
What a stunning photograph, and yea, the Rose is easily seen by me. I enjoyed the imagery of your poem and the flow of you poem sure makes it very enjoyable. Love the thought of a laser-welding Creator etching the stone/stones.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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What a stunning photograph, and yea, the Rose is easily seen by me. I enjoyed the imagery of your poem and the flow of you poem sure makes it very enjoyable. Love the thought of a laser-welding Creator etching the stone/stones.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thank you Karyn. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from tfawcus
Our imagination often discerns shapes and patterns in nature that lead us into contemplation. It is, as you suggest, as if we see the hand of the Almighty at work making sketches for new creations. I imagine that your book of Animated Stills will be fascinating.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Our imagination often discerns shapes and patterns in nature that lead us into contemplation. It is, as you suggest, as if we see the hand of the Almighty at work making sketches for new creations. I imagine that your book of Animated Stills will be fascinating.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thank you Tony. I appreciate that.
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully penned Treischel, and I do see the rose in the photo along with what looks like a rose bud and a leaf. Nicely do on all accounts. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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This is beautifully penned Treischel, and I do see the rose in the photo along with what looks like a rose bud and a leaf. Nicely do on all accounts. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you Patricia. I am very glad that you could see it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
This is a beautiful poem and yes only the Master Artist can do this wonderful artwork. A rose is not easy to draw perfectly by humans. I have done engraving on tombstones before with sandblasting and know how hard it is to work on granite.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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This is a beautiful poem and yes only the Master Artist can do this wonderful artwork. A rose is not easy to draw perfectly by humans. I have done engraving on tombstones before with sandblasting and know how hard it is to work on granite.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sandra. I am pleased you liked it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes, I can see it clearly, Tom. It's amazing when you think how many millions of years it has been there, untouched. We do have so many glorious things that only God could have created in this world, and we are so lucky to be able to come across these that have lasted the eons of time and still are beautiful to the eye. Your poem compliments it beautifully, my friend, I will watch out for your completed book. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Yes, I can see it clearly, Tom. It's amazing when you think how many millions of years it has been there, untouched. We do have so many glorious things that only God could have created in this world, and we are so lucky to be able to come across these that have lasted the eons of time and still are beautiful to the eye. Your poem compliments it beautifully, my friend, I will watch out for your completed book. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you very much Sandra. It may be a while for that one, I have two other books to write before that one, while I collect more example to include.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Tom, this is a very impressive poem that shows off your wonderful writing skills to the ultimate, I can see the rose embedded or carved into that rock but your wonderful words bring it to life, the rhyming, rhythm and flow are all excellent my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Hi Tom, this is a very impressive poem that shows off your wonderful writing skills to the ultimate, I can see the rose embedded or carved into that rock but your wonderful words bring it to life, the rhyming, rhythm and flow are all excellent my friend.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you very much Eric. I appreciate your enthusiasm.
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My pleasure Tom.
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great poem, my friend. A rose within a stone. I thought of a hardhearted person with a soft side to them. The black background was a nice touch. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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This is another great poem, my friend. A rose within a stone. I thought of a hardhearted person with a soft side to them. The black background was a nice touch. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you dmt.
Comment from Pantygynt
Difficult to see the rose, Tom. Difficult to see the rock. Neither of them are actually there. No picture is what I mean. Never mind I can still revciew the poem.
So I'ver used my imagination. I like the comparison with the ten commandments etched into the stone tablets and I can see this rose in my minds eye from reading the poem.
I wonder what happened to the picture.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Difficult to see the rose, Tom. Difficult to see the rock. Neither of them are actually there. No picture is what I mean. Never mind I can still revciew the poem.
So I'ver used my imagination. I like the comparison with the ten commandments etched into the stone tablets and I can see this rose in my minds eye from reading the poem.
I wonder what happened to the picture.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you Pantygynt. I didn't realize that it wasn't in preview mode. You must have grabbed it before I could add the image. It's there now.
Yes we missed all that good snow. A couple feet wouldn't hole us up a bit. In fact, we'd love it. We did have a cold snap. So cold, it completely froze over a large waterfall. I took photos of it yesterday, when it warmed up to 22F. I'll posts something with it soon.
