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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Here's Looking At You"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from NicciFaye
How dare no one bless this beautiful poem without some gold! Here's looking at you kid! And Sam plays on eternal....Michael, a wonderful and loving piece. As usual you never let me down when am looking for something different and daring. Wonderful write.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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How dare no one bless this beautiful poem without some gold! Here's looking at you kid! And Sam plays on eternal....Michael, a wonderful and loving piece. As usual you never let me down when am looking for something different and daring. Wonderful write.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Thank you Nicci...but respect would be a foreign object to reconciled at this point i'm afraid.Thank you for yours Nic...always meant the most anyways. love you Michael
Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Michael (((((((((...
where we weren't waits where (we're) supposed to be...
yeah, holly tongue twisting torment to alliteration Batman... you did that on purpose just to have us all lingering in thought of the deeper connective meaning... hell, I'm not sure if I should be here, there or somewhere to where I should be... talk about air time... you play basketball my man? Floats just like Jordan take off... must say Brother, this did leave me in pieces... a sorta disjointed feeling of not being complete without the other half of who I am... or even for that matter, where I belong?
Haunting stuff... and as usual, your original-unique form that is all you... yeah, love and admire that about you!
With our thoughts we create,
the deepest deception,
James.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hey Michael (((((((((...
where we weren't waits where (we're) supposed to be...
yeah, holly tongue twisting torment to alliteration Batman... you did that on purpose just to have us all lingering in thought of the deeper connective meaning... hell, I'm not sure if I should be here, there or somewhere to where I should be... talk about air time... you play basketball my man? Floats just like Jordan take off... must say Brother, this did leave me in pieces... a sorta disjointed feeling of not being complete without the other half of who I am... or even for that matter, where I belong?
Haunting stuff... and as usual, your original-unique form that is all you... yeah, love and admire that about you!
With our thoughts we create,
the deepest deception,
James.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hey James...-smile- oh shoot...alright let me fix it. appreciate that Bro...yea, thats right something like that. love ya man Michael
Comment from snooker155
this is excellent Michael would have given it a six but have run out of them. The accompanying music from youtube is very pertinent and erotically tasteful and is electrically charged just like the accompanying guitars. Brilliant from Williamx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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this is excellent Michael would have given it a six but have run out of them. The accompanying music from youtube is very pertinent and erotically tasteful and is electrically charged just like the accompanying guitars. Brilliant from Williamx
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Snook...what are you doing man...? I thought you muted me...why..? I had it all set up...the meet and greet remember...? what happened...? Listen this isn't gonna work if your not willing to put forth the effort. You said you would show Buddy...and you didn't. Very disappointing. Anyway, good to see you...how you been....you making friends,,,? love Michael
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yesxx
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if I was to go look would I be happy or sad...?
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well, I think that would be up to you. I can do everything except make your mind up for you that would be your decision entirely now shush I have other poems to review and can't waste time in idle gossip. you may reply to this if you like but I won't from williamx
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well I can appreciate that...Listen while I'm thinking...could you please get me a beer....and...start working on dinner will ya...is my laundry done...?
Comment from amada
Such a beautiful nostalgia trip, thank you Michael. I love that movie, somehow I like movies in black and white. Your words and your song are a beautiful wake up to life, this morning.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Such a beautiful nostalgia trip, thank you Michael. I love that movie, somehow I like movies in black and white. Your words and your song are a beautiful wake up to life, this morning.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Hi Beauty...-smile-...yea, thats where I went. I dont remember the movie...i mean I remember parts of it...I think....a man and women meet and know meant to be...but the "world" is at war and most people are jealous for love. so Sam plays a song over and over almost heard. ...-smile-...love you Michael
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"Beauty" answers get the movie in Netflix, already...
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yes Maam...-smile-
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: always a pleasure, a treasure and a question mark when I read your words. I love this movie. Lost romance during a time of war . . . decisions to make. The loser goes about his life as normal and the other loser flies off with another man who loves her . . . wonderful or tragic having two people love you so much all at the same time. I have fought all my life to find just one . . .my days in the sun, but the sun is setting now. I will rejoice in my memories because it sure was fun searching! Linda
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Michael: always a pleasure, a treasure and a question mark when I read your words. I love this movie. Lost romance during a time of war . . . decisions to make. The loser goes about his life as normal and the other loser flies off with another man who loves her . . . wonderful or tragic having two people love you so much all at the same time. I have fought all my life to find just one . . .my days in the sun, but the sun is setting now. I will rejoice in my memories because it sure was fun searching! Linda
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Hey Thunder...-smile- ...ha...well me too most of the time. hmm...your trying to tell me Ingrid left Humphrey for another man.....lol -headshake-....now that is funny. ....I guess I better watch that movie....I think you may have misinterpreted what you saw. Just doesn't sound possible...anyway haha...
Linda.....what is love....? Real ultimate love...? wasn't it shown to us....gifted to us unworthy of its offer. God is love...."if you've seen Me...you've the Father"....Jesus said.
what did He do Linda....? When a whole world rejected Him...He loved them. Your love made and makes difference...and most assuredly will be missed when its recipients look for its kiss. -smile-...your sun will rise again....love you Michael
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There is no misinterpretation on my part. Bacal was married and during the war she thought her husband had been killed, he was certainly missing. She met Bogey and they had a sweet affair and Bogey fell madly in love with her then she disappeared. They all remeet at Bogey's restaurant. Not a sweet reunion because she is back with her husband. Final scene: Bogey watches her leave on an airplane with her husband and knows he'll never see her again . . . love lost.
I cannot answer the question, "What is love". For an entire lifetime I searched and had a great deal of fun doing so but not sure that I ever found love . . . except God's love. The only pure love I know. All other love I am suspicious of. There's my philosophy for the day!
Too cold to thunder . . .
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There is no misinterpretation on my part. Bacal was married and during the war she thought her husband had been killed, he was certainly missing. She met Bogey and they had a sweet affair and Bogey fell madly in love with her then she disappeared. They all remeet at Bogey's restaurant. Not a sweet reunion because she is back with her husband. Final scene: Bogey watches her leave on an airplane with her husband and knows he'll never see her again . . . love lost.
I cannot answer the question, "What is love". For an entire lifetime I searched and had a great deal of fun doing so but not sure that I ever found love . . . except God's love. The only pure love I know. All other love I am suspicious of. There's my philosophy for the day!
Too cold to thunder . . .
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okay okay...I can take a hint if I'm hit over the head. What'd you do thunder change your name...-smile- well I love you....big whoopie huh...? haha...hope you're feeling well....love-
Comment from RGstar
And my last six goes to my brother in crime. Love the poetic thought of another place and time, for that is where we often find ourselves in order to escape the norm.
Loved the romantic notion of Casablanca in enhancing the above said.
Love the nostalgia, my friend.
Bravo Michael.
RGstar
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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And my last six goes to my brother in crime. Love the poetic thought of another place and time, for that is where we often find ourselves in order to escape the norm.
Loved the romantic notion of Casablanca in enhancing the above said.
Love the nostalgia, my friend.
Bravo Michael.
RGstar
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
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Hey Roy....-smile-...thank you Sir. Always special when you drop by. yep...our hideaway, safe place no one goes unless we let them. Appreciate you being here Roy....love Michael
Comment from l.raven
HI handsome, one of my all time favorite movies...Casablanca...what a romance...and here's looking at you kid as he walks away...great poem Michael...and the music is beautiful...you are brilliant in your writings...I am so sorry I am out of sixes...******...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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HI handsome, one of my all time favorite movies...Casablanca...what a romance...and here's looking at you kid as he walks away...great poem Michael...and the music is beautiful...you are brilliant in your writings...I am so sorry I am out of sixes...******...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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been listening to this guy lately...Zucharro. -smile-
at first I'd only listen to those he sung in English....thought I needed to...to understand it, but I was wrong. -smile-
Iruben me....no one really knows but him I guess...exactly why...what he meant...why he titled it so. He says the name belong to a women he met in Amsterdam...says she was desperate, saw no "good thing" on life. And he said he was moved , being in a similar place at the time....-smile-...I find the sound captivating...ah enough about me Zucharro....how are you Dear...? love Michael
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Hi Michael, how am I??? hummmmm....your kidding right...enough...love Linda
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headshake-...no. I dont always think about myself Linda....only when masterbating....-headtilt-
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never said you only think about yourself...and shame on you...headtilt
Comment from Joan E.
You already know how much I enjoy your references in your poems. Casablanca and its stars are terrific ones. I especially enjoyed your title with the famous quote and your final tercet with its alliteration of "b's". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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You already know how much I enjoy your references in your poems. Casablanca and its stars are terrific ones. I especially enjoyed your title with the famous quote and your final tercet with its alliteration of "b's". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Hey buddy....-smile-...yea nobody can "b" like me...lol ah I noticed you unpleasantly put upon yourself today but another resident expert of six grade effort. I apologize for the ignorance Joan. its a societal issue I'm afraid....Ozzy and Hariot where the hell are ya....haha...love Michael
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Yep, nobody could ever "b" like you! And here's to Ozzy and Harriette too!! Sweet dreams- Joan
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nor you...-smile- goodnight French Teacher-
Comment from busses
This is a great tribute and personal work of art. I congratulate you on the thought that brought me and I'm certain all who have viewed this piece to another place. A lot of great touches here. I loved it!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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This is a great tribute and personal work of art. I congratulate you on the thought that brought me and I'm certain all who have viewed this piece to another place. A lot of great touches here. I loved it!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Why thank you Sir...it is a comfort to know that some new members have a depth of poetic essence in them ...it seems some are more inclined to insect verse and spraying raid on alive. -shouldershrug- new generation I guess...should have spanked their asses no matter what the cops said...look at us now...-smile-..haha...thanks man. love michael
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Back at you Michael. I'm John it's nice to meet you. Write on and I'll read you around, my friend.
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nice to meet you John..-headnod-
Comment from foxangie123
Hmmm,mm,mm,m,m,,,,, I don't think you should write using things of such a history of past. It isn't you as I read. It's not bad, just average, ya know.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Hmmm,mm,mm,m,m,,,,, I don't think you should write using things of such a history of past. It isn't you as I read. It's not bad, just average, ya know.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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I know this....you and me...aint never gonna be. -wink- see ya-
