Falling Off The Edge
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Comment from Joyce Long
What a sad story. A mother had adopted a daughter and it wasn't a good relationship. That is really sad. I'm pleased that the daughter made it to the funeral as she would regret it all the rest of her life. Very emotional story.
Joyce 02-10-16
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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What a sad story. A mother had adopted a daughter and it wasn't a good relationship. That is really sad. I'm pleased that the daughter made it to the funeral as she would regret it all the rest of her life. Very emotional story.
Joyce 02-10-16
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hi Joyce, Thank you so much for your great review. Yes, on the surface I suppose it was sad, so much more is to be revealed. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Curly Girly
That's a sad story. To adopt a child is a big step. I'm not sure that I would want to do it because there are so many complications. But the old, saying seems to stand trure in this case: Blood is thicker than water.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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That's a sad story. To adopt a child is a big step. I'm not sure that I would want to do it because there are so many complications. But the old, saying seems to stand trure in this case: Blood is thicker than water.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hi Nicole, well my adoptive parents couldn't have any children hence they opted for adoption. What happened will be revealed in this story. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Douglas Paul
I think your story is well done. It held my attention all the way through. I liked that you started earlier in the day with your narrative. The ending is sad. But I guess there was closure at least
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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I think your story is well done. It held my attention all the way through. I liked that you started earlier in the day with your narrative. The ending is sad. But I guess there was closure at least
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for the review. This is only the beginning. More to come. All the best. Ulla
