Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

It's a nice description of summer in simple words. From sun shining to summer delights, it came out very well. Excellent artwork too. Wish you all the best at voting booth

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thank you Sambangi for reading and reviewing my entry for the contest . Summer is my favourite time of year and hence I had fun having a go at writing this style, A big cheers to you for your lovely words Cheers

reply by Sambangi on 07-Jan-2016

You are welcome my friend

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

all the wonderful things about Summer...fun in the sun...cook outs, and wonderful days a t the beach...so very well written...and I love your picture ...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Ho Linda , yes I love summer and it truly warms my bones LOL thanks for reading my triolet and I had funning having a go at this style Cheers

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This trinet poem, Summer Delights, is so far off my radar that I would have to stand down in the furnace room to get a vibe for summer. Your poem reads well though, with lots of references to the summer fun.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Hi Bill Thanks for your review but not quite sure what you mean with your reference about Summer delights being off your radar. that you would need to stand in the furnace room to get a vibe.? However as you have rated this 5 stars I assume you actually liked the poem but dont find Summer to you taste. anyway I thank you for your review and time .With many Cheers Christine😃

reply by Bill Schott on 07-Jan-2016

It's twenty degrees F here in Michigan.

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Oh I now get it Cold you say wow Twenty degree farenhight brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr yes a furnace would be lovely LOL I hope you have plenty of warm clothes and heaters. My youngest son is currently in Vancouver so It is a little cold their also . My other son is currently is Bali swealtering in humid heat. Stay warm my friend Cheers Christine

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your well written fun poem. It inspires fun and it flows well with a day at the beach. Your artwork choice is great.

Angel123

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Hi Angel123, With much appreciation for your time to read and review my poem and I am glad it inspired fun as that is how I find Summer I love being warm and brown LOL. Yes I thought this image was cute too
Cheers

Comment from foreverbutterfly

Excellent

This made me smile, and brought back a lot of lovely memories of holidays with my siblings.

It flowed nicely and kept you interested throughout.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Hi foreverbutterfly, Many thanks for your review and great rating for my triolet poem and so glad this gave you a smile and brought back lovely memories of Summer holiday gone by. Appreciate your comments Cheers

Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

You did a good job with this for a first time. That last stanza has 7 words instead of 6 in the two longer lines but overall very well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Hi Dawn of tomorrow. Thanks for your review and oh yes you are very right I did have 7 words but have now changed the line to 'Do love this time of year' so I thank you so much for alerting me to this ( I think it was the I that threw me out seems funny to have a word just out of one Letter) I enjoyed trying this style and pleased you thought it a good job. With thanks and Cheers

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

so glad you cleared up what Barbie and Eski was. For a moment I thought you had the doll Barbie smoking. Ha, ha! This is a new form of poetry for me. I think it worked out quite well. Drew xx

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016

Hi Drew I am glad you dropped by to have a read and yes we Australians have many different terms we use. We shorten most things and many people have no idea what we mean. It like a different language at time and one day I will write a 'Strine' ( short for Australian) poem and that will get you wondering LOL.
Really thankful for your review for my first attemp at this triolet style poem Cheers

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Who doesn't love summer. This piece is certainly good at showing us that such a population would most likely be small. I especially like your imagery of beach fun and spending time with family...and everything else as well. Great job.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016

thank you very much teols2016 I am please you enjoyed this appreciate your review and yes Summer is soul warming Cheers