Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

Your poem has an important message that I wish all would listen to, if we all just got along with one another there would never be any need for weapons or war. A nicely written piece, good luck in the contest...Jacob

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016

Jacob,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....................Portia