To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Souls Know"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Bill Schott
There are a lot of profound phrases in this poem that speak volumes about what we communicate and how it may be received. The main thrust seems to be that unintended reactions may result from innocent or innocuous verbal gestures. Great poem.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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There are a lot of profound phrases in this poem that speak volumes about what we communicate and how it may be received. The main thrust seems to be that unintended reactions may result from innocent or innocuous verbal gestures. Great poem.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Hey, thanks so much. Coming from someone who speaks the truth, good or bad, I can smile knowing this is a real compliment.
All the best this year! mikey
Comment from Ekim777
Our poet is enigmatic. He doesn't hesitate define tired words like soul and love in order to soar heavenward. He is enticed by this practice. I mean, we all know that our souls march to the rhythm of their own drum. Sometimes his wisdom is uncanny. "Love becomes a word to bandy about... paralyzed by the folly of awareness." -Ekim777
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Our poet is enigmatic. He doesn't hesitate define tired words like soul and love in order to soar heavenward. He is enticed by this practice. I mean, we all know that our souls march to the rhythm of their own drum. Sometimes his wisdom is uncanny. "Love becomes a word to bandy about... paralyzed by the folly of awareness." -Ekim777
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I am so honored by your wonderful analysis. This is the kind of encouragement that makes a writer write. Thank you so much.
All the best to you in the coming year. Looking forward to your input and great poetry this year. mikey
Comment from JanPerry
It is true, everything you said about souls joining together. It's as if we have no body, just the souls to join us. Feeling different in this world of ours, I do keep to myself too much.
I was only disturbed by the length of what you are saying. There are many ways to say this, but the length seemed a bit extreme.
Some of it is vicious, [venom spews forth, surprise attack.] Is that to do with the soul?
Well said.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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It is true, everything you said about souls joining together. It's as if we have no body, just the souls to join us. Feeling different in this world of ours, I do keep to myself too much.
I was only disturbed by the length of what you are saying. There are many ways to say this, but the length seemed a bit extreme.
Some of it is vicious, [venom spews forth, surprise attack.] Is that to do with the soul?
Well said.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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You should be happy to know that I used to be even MORE long winded. Hahaha.
The venom is more our human reaction to things. The soul remains pure and often ignored as we react the way we do. Sometimes we don't even know why ourselves. mikey
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Yes, I understand now. Thanks.
Comment from scd41
It is said that love too should be tempered to unite the hearts more firmly just as iron is tempered by heating and then sudden quenching to give extra strength. Your poem expresses well the swinging of emotions in love like a pendulum. I think and hope your decision not to post anymore was like a New Year resolutions which we all take only to fail.
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It is said that love too should be tempered to unite the hearts more firmly just as iron is tempered by heating and then sudden quenching to give extra strength. Your poem expresses well the swinging of emotions in love like a pendulum. I think and hope your decision not to post anymore was like a New Year resolutions which we all take only to fail.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Beautiful insights and most poetic in their own right. My reluctance to post stems from my terrible record as far as responding to reviews and returning the favor. I work full time and it restricts the hours I can spend here. The writing's the easy part. I'm going to TRY and post no more than I can follow up on. Hahaha! I said this last year. :)) mikey
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite philosophical sentiment dear mikey! it is also a rather interesting social commentary! in the end, love conquers all in my humble opinion.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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this is an exquisite philosophical sentiment dear mikey! it is also a rather interesting social commentary! in the end, love conquers all in my humble opinion.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Hi, my friend. I agree whole-heartedly, LOVE conquers all! Thrilled with all the stars and great encouragement.
Thank you so much. Hoping your every desire comes true this year. :)) mikey
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, and why in God's name would you stop posting????...not with a talent let yours...sometimes the words we speak can cut like a knife...I love your poem...and your picture...beautiful...getting tired...going to bad...tomorrow my friend...luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, and why in God's name would you stop posting????...not with a talent let yours...sometimes the words we speak can cut like a knife...I love your poem...and your picture...beautiful...getting tired...going to bad...tomorrow my friend...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I'm going to try and keep up with responses and reviews and all those pesky adult things I'm supposed to do. Posting less will help! I go crazy posting and then I get buried.
Oh well, I said the same thing last year. Ha!!
Hugs, mikey
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your toooo funny Michael...don't slow down to much...love reading you...xxoo Linda
Comment from Sankey
Interesting poem, mate. I wondered about the first couple of words..."though a whisper" should that be "through" a whisper? Maybe not. That picture at the end looks pretty saucy?? They are naked and the position looks like a copulation??
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Interesting poem, mate. I wondered about the first couple of words..."though a whisper" should that be "through" a whisper? Maybe not. That picture at the end looks pretty saucy?? They are naked and the position looks like a copulation??
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Gee, you may be right! I didn't even look at the picture, I was just looking with something that had those words on it. :))
No, "though" was intentional. Great eyes as always.
Hope you and yours have a beautiful New Year. Let's get that book out, yes? I still think you should add the travel book or publish it separately too! Good stuff. mikey
Comment from w.j.debi
Loving and hurting and forgiving. They touch us all in different ways and at different times. This verse is best when read aloud. You have some lovely alliteration and vivid imagery woven throughout this piece.
Congrats on your top ten placement for short works for the year. Pretty amazing!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Loving and hurting and forgiving. They touch us all in different ways and at different times. This verse is best when read aloud. You have some lovely alliteration and vivid imagery woven throughout this piece.
Congrats on your top ten placement for short works for the year. Pretty amazing!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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So pleased you enjoyed. :))
Thanks for the congrats. I was surprised to finish that high. mikey
Comment from Leineco
There is a middle ground
between soaring and plunging
that place where a soul
finds peace and serenity
but man's lot
on this plane is to ever exchange
the one for the other
accumulating
callouses and scars.
the most well intentioned kiss
stings when applied to a bruise
the most-tender caress
grates across an uneven surface
surely captures
the underlying truth
of love's
capacity
to demand
the price of tribute.
Compelling write Michael.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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There is a middle ground
between soaring and plunging
that place where a soul
finds peace and serenity
but man's lot
on this plane is to ever exchange
the one for the other
accumulating
callouses and scars.
the most well intentioned kiss
stings when applied to a bruise
the most-tender caress
grates across an uneven surface
surely captures
the underlying truth
of love's
capacity
to demand
the price of tribute.
Compelling write Michael.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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A six for your beautiful insightful response. Hey, I think you could write some poetry based on this review!!! Looking forward to more of your amazing work this year. mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Okay have to know, why did you say you would quit posting?
You are my muse...don't you dare.
this is so blessedly written. I love the easy descriptions and the art chosen to go with it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Okay have to know, why did you say you would quit posting?
You are my muse...don't you dare.
this is so blessedly written. I love the easy descriptions and the art chosen to go with it.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I just want to be a better responder and reviewer this year. When I post too much I get BURIED. :))
I'm so delighted you enjoyed this. I'll try and post enough to keep ya going. Hahaha! Hugs, mikey
