Little Poems
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Comment from TallySally
Good grief - this is so clever!
A boggling concept with flawless execution.
You've proved yourself poet, visionary, designer, artist and graphics guru.
AND a teacher - I lost count of all the informative topics..
Bravo! Brilliant!
Relda
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Good grief - this is so clever!
A boggling concept with flawless execution.
You've proved yourself poet, visionary, designer, artist and graphics guru.
AND a teacher - I lost count of all the informative topics..
Bravo! Brilliant!
Relda
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much Reida. I enjoyed you exuberance, as well as those stars.
Comment from Kingsland
This is a very creative piece of poetic picture writing. You have done an excellent job with this very entertaining piece of poetry. This has everything right about it and nothing for me to suggest. I enjoyed reading this very creative piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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This is a very creative piece of poetic picture writing. You have done an excellent job with this very entertaining piece of poetry. This has everything right about it and nothing for me to suggest. I enjoyed reading this very creative piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much John.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Those antique bikes are so cool but I don't think I would like riding one:) I couldn't make out the words on the spokes, just the wheel. Fun style though.
teresa
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Those antique bikes are so cool but I don't think I would like riding one:) I couldn't make out the words on the spokes, just the wheel. Fun style though.
teresa
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thank you Teresa. I modified the picture by cropping it and making it slightly bigger.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Hi, I gave you 6 stars because you did such a great job with you poem. The one problems for me was: it was a challenge to read; I maneuvered my computer such that I could read upside and all around. I was able to read most of the words.
What a work of art!! Also, I like the fact that you used a friend of the artist, Marc Chagall, for your mentoring.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Hi, I gave you 6 stars because you did such a great job with you poem. The one problems for me was: it was a challenge to read; I maneuvered my computer such that I could read upside and all around. I was able to read most of the words.
What a work of art!! Also, I like the fact that you used a friend of the artist, Marc Chagall, for your mentoring.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thank you nancy. I appreciate the review and the stars. I have since modified the image to make it slightly larger and added author notes.
Comment from patcelaw
Treischel I like the antique bike, but cannot make out the words that you used to created it. It may help my understanding a bit better if I knew what the words are. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Treischel I like the antique bike, but cannot make out the words that you used to created it. It may help my understanding a bit better if I knew what the words are. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Oh my, I am sorry that you can't read them. Maybe I'll add some author notes to help.
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That would help.
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I modified the picture by cropping it and making it slightly bigger. I also added author notes.
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With enlarging it a bit I could read most of the lines, but thanks for providing the text as well.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
An awesome bike and very creatively done. If we are suppose to read the words, I must sadly say, I can't make out what the words are, especially the lighter words.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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An awesome bike and very creatively done. If we are suppose to read the words, I must sadly say, I can't make out what the words are, especially the lighter words.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Oh my, I am sorry that you can't read them. Maybe I'll add some author notes to help.
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I modified the picture by cropping it and making it slightly bigger. I also added author notes.
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The notes helped a lot thank you. A clever thought out Caligram
