Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Get Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Amy Greta
I love it so much! I could almost hear the country music playing as I read your heartfelt and genuine, real-life lyrics!
This is an awesome song and I can completely relate to the feelings of being trapped in work, debt and heartache.
I also noticed that the old sort of run down, ugly factory produces SUGAR which is so white and pure and sweet....perfect contrast to his life at work and the life he wants with his love.
I really enjoyed your song!
Amy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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I love it so much! I could almost hear the country music playing as I read your heartfelt and genuine, real-life lyrics!
This is an awesome song and I can completely relate to the feelings of being trapped in work, debt and heartache.
I also noticed that the old sort of run down, ugly factory produces SUGAR which is so white and pure and sweet....perfect contrast to his life at work and the life he wants with his love.
I really enjoyed your song!
Amy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from chcbeck
I love this and so true, you don't take real stock of things that are important until something happens to really frighten you into thinking this, however, you soon return to the rat race. You don't regret not working enough. I shall look out for some more of your work, really enjoyed.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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I love this and so true, you don't take real stock of things that are important until something happens to really frighten you into thinking this, however, you soon return to the rat race. You don't regret not working enough. I shall look out for some more of your work, really enjoyed.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from chasennov
Too much hard work is not good for love "Get Away" This is a very good poem you have created here in free Style. I just feel it could be a lot more powerful, meaningful and delivering if it were in rhyming form. Well done.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Too much hard work is not good for love "Get Away" This is a very good poem you have created here in free Style. I just feel it could be a lot more powerful, meaningful and delivering if it were in rhyming form. Well done.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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This review is obviously nothing more than a senseless, vindictive one.
Spend the Member Cents wisely.
You state it is very good than give it one star.
I will not lower myself to your standards with any more of a response than that.
You have some kind of issue with me, or my writing, MUTE me.
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I have. You were the senseless one, keep going that way.
Comment from Teri7
These are some really nice lyrics you have penned my friend. I can see it being sold as a great country song. You are very good at that. I am sure your book will be a best seller. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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These are some really nice lyrics you have penned my friend. I can see it being sold as a great country song. You are very good at that. I am sure your book will be a best seller. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from c_lucas
There comes a time in life where a change will be temporarily welcome. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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There comes a time in life where a change will be temporarily welcome. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Comment from MelB
Everyone needs some time to play and take a break from work. Even better to have someone to enjoy the time with you. Enjoyed this one!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Everyone needs some time to play and take a break from work. Even better to have someone to enjoy the time with you. Enjoyed this one!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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My pleasure.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This old sugar factory looks a lot like Battersea Power Station, but a lot of these industrial buildings look alike.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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This is yet another interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This old sugar factory looks a lot like Battersea Power Station, but a lot of these industrial buildings look alike.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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My pleasure.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Your lyrics for Go Away are very nice too. I love to read whatever you write as you're so good at writing all kinds of things. Your wife must be very proud of you and she had every right to feel that way.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Hi Brett,
Your lyrics for Go Away are very nice too. I love to read whatever you write as you're so good at writing all kinds of things. Your wife must be very proud of you and she had every right to feel that way.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Yes, they were nice.
Comment from judiverse
Very understandable. A getaway is called for from time to time. In the case of your narrator, all the work and stress is playing havoc with his love life. Just a week away is all he's asking for, so I hope the boss hears him. Come on, give the guy some time off! A lot of people will relate to this, as many men and women feel the stress of a heavy workload. Excellent work. Happy trails. judi
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Very understandable. A getaway is called for from time to time. In the case of your narrator, all the work and stress is playing havoc with his love life. Just a week away is all he's asking for, so I hope the boss hears him. Come on, give the guy some time off! A lot of people will relate to this, as many men and women feel the stress of a heavy workload. Excellent work. Happy trails. judi
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're very welcome. Happy trails. judi
Comment from Tessa Kay
All work and no play is not good for anyone.
I like the same ole same ole same ole same. Drives the point home.
Nice one. :)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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All work and no play is not good for anyone.
I like the same ole same ole same ole same. Drives the point home.
Nice one. :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics so many FanStorians have told me they can relate to. Your comments and support appreciated.
