Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Get Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
26 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Brett,
Well isn't that just the way of the world? Work harder and harder for a better life but those you work hard for slip further away.
A keenly observed and well written piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Hi Brett,
Well isn't that just the way of the world? Work harder and harder for a better life but those you work hard for slip further away.
A keenly observed and well written piece.
GMG
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Yes it is the way of the world. Work like a dog and sacrifice your home life doing it. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from scd41
Many workaholics would easily relate to the lyrics. It is smooth flowing and simple that makes it enjoyable read. It is a paradox that man in his search for better living sacrifices his leisure and family life by working harder and harder.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Many workaholics would easily relate to the lyrics. It is smooth flowing and simple that makes it enjoyable read. It is a paradox that man in his search for better living sacrifices his leisure and family life by working harder and harder.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from pbomar1115
What a quaint poem is what I said. The story of working, drinking, doctor visit, girlfriend and I'm sure there are other images I'm missing. But, I enjoyed the story of the guy. And by the way, I liked him. His lovable personality came through. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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What a quaint poem is what I said. The story of working, drinking, doctor visit, girlfriend and I'm sure there are other images I'm missing. But, I enjoyed the story of the guy. And by the way, I liked him. His lovable personality came through. Nice poem.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're welcome.
Comment from trumby
Beautiful lyrics, wonderful creation. The hardworking man begs for his wife not to give up on him. I must admit, I can relate very well to this one. I keep working very hard for our future, but my wife is having hard time to understand what I am doing. I have to balance my time for my wife and my work, its not that easy.
I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Beautiful lyrics, wonderful creation. The hardworking man begs for his wife not to give up on him. I must admit, I can relate very well to this one. I keep working very hard for our future, but my wife is having hard time to understand what I am doing. I have to balance my time for my wife and my work, its not that easy.
I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Being a hard working man, and balancing the home front along with it, certainly is not easy. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Well done Brett, beautifully written in smooth free verse, do you have accompanying music, or just Lyrics Brett? Nicely composed, the theme is right, the lyrics flow with a lovely fluidity, for something that doesn't rhyme, there is a lot of couplets that do, even proximates, I used to write them just like that, the rhyme creeps in because it belongs there, consciously or subconsciously, whatever, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Well done Brett, beautifully written in smooth free verse, do you have accompanying music, or just Lyrics Brett? Nicely composed, the theme is right, the lyrics flow with a lovely fluidity, for something that doesn't rhyme, there is a lot of couplets that do, even proximates, I used to write them just like that, the rhyme creeps in because it belongs there, consciously or subconsciously, whatever, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Most welcome Brett
Comment from AnnieDawn
I like your lyrics and most of the songs that are sung these days do not have a definite rhyme to them, they just seem to tell a story like you have written here. Have you submitted any of what you have written to any artists? Rather than singles, it might go over better or give a better selection if you submitted the published work. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I like your lyrics and most of the songs that are sung these days do not have a definite rhyme to them, they just seem to tell a story like you have written here. Have you submitted any of what you have written to any artists? Rather than singles, it might go over better or give a better selection if you submitted the published work. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Such passion and desperation to save his home life. Begs his lover or wife not to give up on him. Verses play serious tune of man's sincere plea he is hard working man. Good luck with love..liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Such passion and desperation to save his home life. Begs his lover or wife not to give up on him. Verses play serious tune of man's sincere plea he is hard working man. Good luck with love..liberty justice
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Jay Squires
So Brett, these are song lyrics, then? Me lika lot! (I don't know why I just did that). I did like your lyrics though. I was unaware of your verse. I believe the only thing I've read of yours was prose.
I love your bridge: "So, build a bridge, drive a van
Come on, baby, take my hand."
Is that what songwriters call it? A bridge? I always get into trouble being something I'm not. Whatever it is I enjoy the repetition of it.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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So Brett, these are song lyrics, then? Me lika lot! (I don't know why I just did that). I did like your lyrics though. I was unaware of your verse. I believe the only thing I've read of yours was prose.
I love your bridge: "So, build a bridge, drive a van
Come on, baby, take my hand."
Is that what songwriters call it? A bridge? I always get into trouble being something I'm not. Whatever it is I enjoy the repetition of it.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I am a Country music lyricist first. I presently have 42, or so, All-Time Best lyrics posted on this site. I also dabble in other forms of short stories. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. A fun little ditty expressing the hard working man's plight in too many cases. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from foxangie123
Nice job as you have created a great piece of poetry which are lyrics as I see it. You are so very creative with your formatting of wording towards music. Great Job.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Nice job as you have created a great piece of poetry which are lyrics as I see it. You are so very creative with your formatting of wording towards music. Great Job.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Great Work..
Comment from Zue65
Oh yes, as they say, too much work makes a man a dull boy. LOL. Yes, love and work is a balancing game. We need to devote equal time for family and work to make things work perfectly. Your poem emphasized that message I guess. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Oh yes, as they say, too much work makes a man a dull boy. LOL. Yes, love and work is a balancing game. We need to devote equal time for family and work to make things work perfectly. Your poem emphasized that message I guess. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
