Little Poems
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful write, treischel, beautiful imagery presented in these words, made me vision it in my mind, so sweet and gentle, great flow from line to line. I enjoyed reading this one. made me smile.
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this is a beautiful write, treischel, beautiful imagery presented in these words, made me vision it in my mind, so sweet and gentle, great flow from line to line. I enjoyed reading this one. made me smile.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you sweetwoodjax. Glad you captured the essence so well.
Comment from Joan E.
Another new form (at least to me)! I was also amazed that you took the picture--you outdo yourself! I thoroughly enjoyed your use of the Monchielle, with its rhymes, rhythm and repeats. Here's to sweet dreams about flying! Huge hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Another new form (at least to me)! I was also amazed that you took the picture--you outdo yourself! I thoroughly enjoyed your use of the Monchielle, with its rhymes, rhythm and repeats. Here's to sweet dreams about flying! Huge hugs- Joan
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Joan. I appreciate the compliment.
Comment from Jay Squires
I guess flight has been the dream of mankind since the beginning of time.
Then flying became the symbol of the imagination.
And the reverse image of imagination might be the soaring that one feels on drugs.
Only real flying and drugs can result in crashing--unless your imagination takes you to areas in which it should not go.
Maybe staying on the ground is the best.
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I guess flight has been the dream of mankind since the beginning of time.
Then flying became the symbol of the imagination.
And the reverse image of imagination might be the soaring that one feels on drugs.
Only real flying and drugs can result in crashing--unless your imagination takes you to areas in which it should not go.
Maybe staying on the ground is the best.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Jay. I'll take my chances on flight.
Comment from patcelaw
I remember as a little girl, lying on my back in the lush grass watching the birds flay and how I wished I could fly away form the abuse of my home. I have flown in many different craft, but my favorite was in a hot air balloon. Patricia
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I remember as a little girl, lying on my back in the lush grass watching the birds flay and how I wished I could fly away form the abuse of my home. I have flown in many different craft, but my favorite was in a hot air balloon. Patricia
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I'll have to add that to my bucket list.
