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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Scene at a Spaghetti Dinner"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
18 total reviews
Comment from nartoonla
Hi, Amusing piece and enjoyed it well done! A silent political hint if not mistaken. Fun. And viva Italia and their pasta and sun.
In Bologna, you will find just what many eat in the good old USA. Spaghetti Bolognese and yet Roma, Venezia, as Florence as most visited... offer other good plates.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hi, Amusing piece and enjoyed it well done! A silent political hint if not mistaken. Fun. And viva Italia and their pasta and sun.
In Bologna, you will find just what many eat in the good old USA. Spaghetti Bolognese and yet Roma, Venezia, as Florence as most visited... offer other good plates.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Ned?s mostly interested in Spaghetti-Os in a can.
Comment from lyenochka
There goes Ned again! Loved the line, "Their pastor's a bigot!?!" mishearing about the pasta. However, would someone like Ned even know about amoebas? Can't even imagine him saying, "Her amoebic dysentery." Pons might though after Ned described it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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There goes Ned again! Loved the line, "Their pastor's a bigot!?!" mishearing about the pasta. However, would someone like Ned even know about amoebas? Can't even imagine him saying, "Her amoebic dysentery." Pons might though after Ned described it.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Good point. This is an older scene; Ned has gotten dumber as the series has proceeded.
Comment from nomi338
Oh Lord. This poor shmuck may have two feet, but they seem to both be lefties, because he could not get out of his own way, even if he was double jointed.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Oh Lord. This poor shmuck may have two feet, but they seem to both be lefties, because he could not get out of his own way, even if he was double jointed.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from Henry King
Review by Henry: What? Ned must have artillery ear, probably around too many 155s firing for effect at charge 8. That was good. I have been in many conversations like that with buddies, and even my children. We have them texting to each other across several time zones. This is a realistic conversation between close people. I cannot say, that it ties in with the previous scene or within the script, because I haven't read them.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Review by Henry: What? Ned must have artillery ear, probably around too many 155s firing for effect at charge 8. That was good. I have been in many conversations like that with buddies, and even my children. We have them texting to each other across several time zones. This is a realistic conversation between close people. I cannot say, that it ties in with the previous scene or within the script, because I haven't read them.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Henry
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Reply by Henry: Your Welcome.
Comment from apky
Hello Bill,
I think I need to borrow these two from you, especially on my gloomy days. Laurel and Hardy? No match for Ned and Pons. I can imagine them on some local or national radio, going back and forth. The station would probably have a ban on listening to it while driving or something.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hello Bill,
I think I need to borrow these two from you, especially on my gloomy days. Laurel and Hardy? No match for Ned and Pons. I can imagine them on some local or national radio, going back and forth. The station would probably have a ban on listening to it while driving or something.
Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, apky
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love this Who's on First dialogue. I'm in public and I was laughing out loud. You should get paid for this. Call the folks at Saturday Night Live. Send them your scripts. They need them.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I love this Who's on First dialogue. I'm in public and I was laughing out loud. You should get paid for this. Call the folks at Saturday Night Live. Send them your scripts. They need them.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Debbie
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is an interesting scene here. I like the way that you play on words with your dialects here. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is an interesting scene here. I like the way that you play on words with your dialects here. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Tomes, for giving this a look. Bill
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My pleasure.
Comment from chasennov
"Scene at a Spaghetti Dinner" I love this type of script turned into great humor. You have done a magnificent job with it, Bill. Absolutely well done.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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"Scene at a Spaghetti Dinner" I love this type of script turned into great humor. You have done a magnificent job with it, Bill. Absolutely well done.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Chase. You have given me a big shot in the arm. Bill
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You are most welcome, Bill.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Pons: Yes. Their pasta is a big hit.
Ned: What? Their pastor's a bigot!?!
LOL! What great lines! Misunderstood words usually make for good humor and you've used the technique very well here. :)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Pons: Yes. Their pasta is a big hit.
Ned: What? Their pastor's a bigot!?!
LOL! What great lines! Misunderstood words usually make for good humor and you've used the technique very well here. :)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Phyllis, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my land, Bill I shall never eat meatballs and asghetti eva again. Amoebas you say?! Ugh
Love the Catlicks though, that is most apropos.
The play on words is terrific and I think highlights all the problems we have misunderstanding each other--even in person--of deline. Language is the source of all our difficulties.
Very fun and great to see you writing a script.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Oh my land, Bill I shall never eat meatballs and asghetti eva again. Amoebas you say?! Ugh
Love the Catlicks though, that is most apropos.
The play on words is terrific and I think highlights all the problems we have misunderstanding each other--even in person--of deline. Language is the source of all our difficulties.
Very fun and great to see you writing a script.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Gloria, for giving this a look. Bill
