King of Kings
He came to save us all.15 total reviews
Comment from mumsyone
Great poem and presentation, Kay. "Oh, come let us adore Him" for sure. I wish you a very Merry Christmas Down Under from one who's been there.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Great poem and presentation, Kay. "Oh, come let us adore Him" for sure. I wish you a very Merry Christmas Down Under from one who's been there.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Hello Luverly Lois, I love Christmas (probably why you will get three Ecards!) Thanks so much for reading. Enjoy your family time and think about us with prawns and salads. Love, Kay XX
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And a Happy Christmas to you too, my dear friend. What a lovely poem, and the repeating line is perfect. Too many people forget the real reason for Christmas, which is such a shame as it is all about love and giving of yourself for others. Excellent. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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And a Happy Christmas to you too, my dear friend. What a lovely poem, and the repeating line is perfect. Too many people forget the real reason for Christmas, which is such a shame as it is all about love and giving of yourself for others. Excellent. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Hello my dear friend Sandra, Hope you are not flooded like the poor people in the West country. Dreadful, one of my favourite places around Keswick and the Lake District. Are you staying home for Christmas? How is your knee/scar mending now? I do worry about you being so down. My love and care, Kay XX
Comment from bcwoods
The subject matter was great. I like the way you repeated that most important line. The one thing that was difficult for me was the sentences in the stanzas didn't seem to always connect. It stated fact, but I felt it lacked a sense of emotion that would have drawn me in more.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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The subject matter was great. I like the way you repeated that most important line. The one thing that was difficult for me was the sentences in the stanzas didn't seem to always connect. It stated fact, but I felt it lacked a sense of emotion that would have drawn me in more.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thank you bcwoods. It wasn't meant to be emotional, it was a message of hope for the world. Christmas blessings, K.
Comment from Eigle Rull
At this time of the year I can think of no better subject to write about than the one you used. Good words and thoughts from a good friend and neighbor. Thank you.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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At this time of the year I can think of no better subject to write about than the one you used. Good words and thoughts from a good friend and neighbor. Thank you.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks so much my friend, sending hugs across the miles at Christmas time. Love, K.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a solid write. It reminds us of the Christmas meaning and the Son of God. A message we all need to be reminded of this time of year. It carries with it a beautiful picture to enhance. Well done.
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This is a solid write. It reminds us of the Christmas meaning and the Son of God. A message we all need to be reminded of this time of year. It carries with it a beautiful picture to enhance. Well done.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much for reading. Happy Christmas from Australia!
