Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

amahra,

I love your antonym poem! Your form is really fine
and the theme and perfect message is conveyed in an
outstanding way. Your presentation is also
impressive...I like your bold font in beginning
and end.

Thank you for sharing this and well done,
Linda

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016

Thank you very much.

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

I very much like your Antonym Poem, Amahra.

Your use of "Light" and "Darkness" works well in this impactful poem. The enjambment you've used from one line to the next makes for a great flow of words.

Very well done. This is a strong entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

I didn't come close to winning, but thank you so much for this wonderful review.

reply by acerisestory on 01-Jan-2016

The contests are very difficult, I think. So few people vote, and it's impossible to know who it will be from one contest to the next. No matter what, your poem was impressive. Take care. Alana

reply by Anonymous Member on 04-Jan-2016

The contests are very difficult, I think. So few people vote, and it's impossible to know who it will be from one contest to the next. No matter what, your poem was impressive. Take care. Alana

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your timely, spiritual poem. I admired the contrast between the two words and your message. Happy holidays and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Loved this. Light and darkness - how powerful. A strong message in a few words.

Well done, Aunty Harriett!

Love,

Sonali (yes, it's me - Reachingforthestars - bless you!)

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thank you, Selina.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this clever little verse:
LIGHT
Entered the world through a humble virgin
And conquered the
DARKNESS
Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015

Nope, didn't win, not even close. LOL But thank you Curly.

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Nice job with the antonym prompt of light vs dark. It is true what you state in the poem about Jesus. He himself said, "In the world you will have tribulation, but take courage! I have conquered the world." (John 16:33) He said that because the world ruler is dark for he said: "Now there is a judging of this world; now the ruler of this world will be cast out." (John 12:31)

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015

thank you very much.

Comment from suep

Excellent

Excellent antonym poem and great reminder of the true reason for the season. Inspiring and hope filled. Beautifully presented. Great work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015

thank you very much.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Wow! What a wonderfully spiritual piece of artwork you have chosen my friend! Does not compare to the masterfully crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015

Thank you very much.

reply by Neonewman on 04-Dec-2015

My Pleasure!

reply by Anonymous Member on 06-Dec-2015

My Pleasure!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

You did a wonderful job with this beautiful poem. This is the time to feel blessed and honor our Lord. You used very good descriptive wording. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Like the contrast of light vs. dark. It's what makes this poem. Read youe author notes and it explains the structure of this which reads very well. Flows smoothly. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015

Than you so very much.