Yeti Crab
Christmas poem27 total reviews
Comment from Jacob Collins
I thought that this was a well written piece, mermaids. I liked how you wrote about how Christmas is celebrated in other places, even if they may be fictional. A well written piece, thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I thought that this was a well written piece, mermaids. I liked how you wrote about how Christmas is celebrated in other places, even if they may be fictional. A well written piece, thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thanks for reading about the yeti crab. I appreciate your great review. Elaine
Comment from w.j.debi
What an interesting capture you describe and bring it from fantasy into the light of reality. Sometime nature can reveal stranger creatures than we will ever be all to imaging.
Nice end rhyming in your couplets.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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What an interesting capture you describe and bring it from fantasy into the light of reality. Sometime nature can reveal stranger creatures than we will ever be all to imaging.
Nice end rhyming in your couplets.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Pyrrho
I'm Dreaming of a White Yeti.
Just like the Big-Foot I used to Know ...."
"Oh me father was the keeper of the Eddie-stone light and he slept with a mermaid one fine night." Google that song and enjoy.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I'm Dreaming of a White Yeti.
Just like the Big-Foot I used to Know ...."
"Oh me father was the keeper of the Eddie-stone light and he slept with a mermaid one fine night." Google that song and enjoy.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I am familiar with the Eddie-stone light, a great song. Love your Christmas song about the yeti! Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from foxangie123
I so very much love this as I admire all works of art that have to do with the water. I so was fascinated with Mermaids as a child and even now. I love this. It makes the reader feel free.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I so very much love this as I admire all works of art that have to do with the water. I so was fascinated with Mermaids as a child and even now. I love this. It makes the reader feel free.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Leineco
I just had to stop by :-) I recently stumbled across this pic and discovered the yeti crab myself :-)
I saved the pic - but couldn't for the life of me figure out what to write to it!!
Wonderful take, adding the mermaid world and Christmas.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I just had to stop by :-) I recently stumbled across this pic and discovered the yeti crab myself :-)
I saved the pic - but couldn't for the life of me figure out what to write to it!!
Wonderful take, adding the mermaid world and Christmas.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from CallieWVU2
I really like the idea and the image of a yeti crab, it's definitely original and not something I would have expected for a Christmas poem, but I think it works perfectly, the images are lovely. I think Ariel is jealous that she left the sea behind her. I'll have to check out this yeti crab, thank you for the new information. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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I really like the idea and the image of a yeti crab, it's definitely original and not something I would have expected for a Christmas poem, but I think it works perfectly, the images are lovely. I think Ariel is jealous that she left the sea behind her. I'll have to check out this yeti crab, thank you for the new information. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Amy Greta
Yes, very interesting indeed, as I have never heard of the yeti crab; I live nowhere near a coast of any kind, so I'm not well versed in sea creatures.
At any rate...Your poem is SO imaginative!
It was a fun and enjoyable read, made me smile:)
Amy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Yes, very interesting indeed, as I have never heard of the yeti crab; I live nowhere near a coast of any kind, so I'm not well versed in sea creatures.
At any rate...Your poem is SO imaginative!
It was a fun and enjoyable read, made me smile:)
Amy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thanks for reading and enjoying the yeti crab. Elaine
Comment from kiwisteveh
A nice variation on the standard tree and decorations - your simple rhyming couplets tell a sweet little story and also give us a glimpse of a fantasy home beneath the waves.
I have to say I found the second couplet quite confusing at first - you hadn't mentioned the yeti crab before this and yet her husband seems to be laughing off her chances of finding one - the reader can only interpret this from what comes later....
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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A nice variation on the standard tree and decorations - your simple rhyming couplets tell a sweet little story and also give us a glimpse of a fantasy home beneath the waves.
I have to say I found the second couplet quite confusing at first - you hadn't mentioned the yeti crab before this and yet her husband seems to be laughing off her chances of finding one - the reader can only interpret this from what comes later....
Steve
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Mermaids, an interesting piece that includes mermaids, Christmas and yeti crabs all in the same story line. I can see why the crab is called a yeti crab with its white and fury body.
The lines of "Benjamin, a fluffy white boy" and "a surprised husband extends a shaking hand" threw me off slightly. I had to read it more than once to realize the crab was called Benjamin. Also, the mention of 'husband' didn't seem to fit in the poem.
Just my observation. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Mermaids, an interesting piece that includes mermaids, Christmas and yeti crabs all in the same story line. I can see why the crab is called a yeti crab with its white and fury body.
The lines of "Benjamin, a fluffy white boy" and "a surprised husband extends a shaking hand" threw me off slightly. I had to read it more than once to realize the crab was called Benjamin. Also, the mention of 'husband' didn't seem to fit in the poem.
Just my observation. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thanks for your observations, this poem needs more work and rhyming is not my strong point. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Laidy
Awe, this was a very cute poem. I am glad they were nice mermaids and mermen to include a human in their mergames. (Not being sent away like Rudolf at one point in time.)
I loved it.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Awe, this was a very cute poem. I am glad they were nice mermaids and mermen to include a human in their mergames. (Not being sent away like Rudolf at one point in time.)
I loved it.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2015
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
