Faith
Self-worth coupled with God's love leads us to success61 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
The author portrays God as being everywhere and has philosophical and spiritual that one can visit God anywhere. The author's imagery of one's self worth should be determined by one's actions. A truly spiritual awakening.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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The author portrays God as being everywhere and has philosophical and spiritual that one can visit God anywhere. The author's imagery of one's self worth should be determined by one's actions. A truly spiritual awakening.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you for your lovely review and comments. I am so glad you liked it.
~RP.
Comment from Nosha17
Lovely poem showing how faith can give confidence and thus a happier life. Well chosen imagery and excellent rhyming. Excellent spiritual message. faye
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Lovely poem showing how faith can give confidence and thus a happier life. Well chosen imagery and excellent rhyming. Excellent spiritual message. faye
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you Faye, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and SIX STARS. ~ RP
Comment from l.raven
HI RP, so good to see you my friend...it's when you know your worth...you know who you are...your confidence to stand tall...you know you can make it in this so stressful world...and you know God stands with you...your faith stands strong...you know your belief in Him is why you stand tall...a wonderful poem of Faith...and a beautiful picture...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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HI RP, so good to see you my friend...it's when you know your worth...you know who you are...your confidence to stand tall...you know you can make it in this so stressful world...and you know God stands with you...your faith stands strong...you know your belief in Him is why you stand tall...a wonderful poem of Faith...and a beautiful picture...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Hi L. Raven,
Thank you very much for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and SIX STARS.
~ RP
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you are so welcome RP...and yes you earned them...a wonderful poem...luff xxoo
Comment from Sambangi
Hi RPSaxena,
This is a very well written poem. I agree with your thinking, God is in our heart and let us seek for inner light.
End rhyming is quite good. You maintained that through out the poem making it lovable to read.
We all know what is happening in the name of God around all these worship places. It is the temple inside that would be pure and worthy to worship.
All the best
Cheers
Sambangi
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Hi RPSaxena,
This is a very well written poem. I agree with your thinking, God is in our heart and let us seek for inner light.
End rhyming is quite good. You maintained that through out the poem making it lovable to read.
We all know what is happening in the name of God around all these worship places. It is the temple inside that would be pure and worthy to worship.
All the best
Cheers
Sambangi
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Sambangi, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and Best Wishes. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Nice religious poem about self-worth and Christianity. You feel that your faith helps you reach your goals. You did a good job expressing yourself through written form.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Hello :)
Nice religious poem about self-worth and Christianity. You feel that your faith helps you reach your goals. You did a good job expressing yourself through written form.
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Gypsy, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts and fantastic words. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
Comment from Bryana
I absolutely love your poem. You mentioned, the temple, mosque and church, all the house of God. All the house of God, if people would think this way there wouldn't be crimes over religion. We must respect every religion and expect others to respect ours.
Your poem is very profound and makes us think about the love for God.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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I absolutely love your poem. You mentioned, the temple, mosque and church, all the house of God. All the house of God, if people would think this way there wouldn't be crimes over religion. We must respect every religion and expect others to respect ours.
Your poem is very profound and makes us think about the love for God.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Bryana, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts and fantastic words. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
Comment from Dean Kuch
You're absolutely correct in stating that finding worth in one's self, as well as others, is the key to a fruitful and successful life, RPSaxena. That message comes through loud and clear in your entry for the FAITH poetry contest. Your carefully chosen wording, phraseology, and rhyming quatrains portray your poetic prowess perfectly.
Best of luck to you in the booths...
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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You're absolutely correct in stating that finding worth in one's self, as well as others, is the key to a fruitful and successful life, RPSaxena. That message comes through loud and clear in your entry for the FAITH poetry contest. Your carefully chosen wording, phraseology, and rhyming quatrains portray your poetic prowess perfectly.
Best of luck to you in the booths...
~Dean
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Dean Kuch, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and Best of luck wishes. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
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You're more than welcome RP.
~Dean
Comment from mermaids
I like your message about faith making strong and successful. Let's feel Him within as the best energy source is a wonderful line full of wisdom and good advice. Excellent rhyming of words ands a smooth flow of lines. best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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I like your message about faith making strong and successful. Let's feel Him within as the best energy source is a wonderful line full of wisdom and good advice. Excellent rhyming of words ands a smooth flow of lines. best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Mermaids, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and Best Wishes. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
Comment from alvina224224
An important poem illustrating the value of self-worth and faith, RPSaxena. Using words that any reader can understand and relate to, makes it a poem that deserves a much wider readership.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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An important poem illustrating the value of self-worth and faith, RPSaxena. Using words that any reader can understand and relate to, makes it a poem that deserves a much wider readership.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Alvina, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and the most coveted SIX STARS. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
Comment from royowen
Well done RP, written from that vast storehouse of wisdom that you possess in God, I've just come from reading Pyrrho's cynical and mocking poem, but couldn't review, too angry. He quoted JB Shaw's "all thinking men are atheists", but I'd love him to face JRRTolkien, CS Lewis, Isaac Newton, and RP Saxena and say that to their face, apart from RP they're all dead but yet live, "the fool has said in his heart, there is no God." How can one prove something they can't see. This wonderful poem highlights exactly that RP, beautifully fulsome work, the narrative is smooth as silk, the wording sublime and the aabb rhyming perfect, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Well done RP, written from that vast storehouse of wisdom that you possess in God, I've just come from reading Pyrrho's cynical and mocking poem, but couldn't review, too angry. He quoted JB Shaw's "all thinking men are atheists", but I'd love him to face JRRTolkien, CS Lewis, Isaac Newton, and RP Saxena and say that to their face, apart from RP they're all dead but yet live, "the fool has said in his heart, there is no God." How can one prove something they can't see. This wonderful poem highlights exactly that RP, beautifully fulsome work, the narrative is smooth as silk, the wording sublime and the aabb rhyming perfect, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
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Thank you Roy, for this wonderful review, gracious thoughts, fantastic words and the morale boosting SIX STARS. I am so glad you liked it. ~ RP
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Well earned and welcome
