Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 341 "Quiet Streets"Small and Specialty Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
Hello Tom,
I've not seen this form before, I don't think... The fall colors of the photo are just gorgeous... and the words go so well... with both photo and form...
I wondered at the third 'quiet' which reads:
[Quite] streets,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,
(should this be quiet?)
Well written, as always,
Cat
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
  |
Hello Tom,
I've not seen this form before, I don't think... The fall colors of the photo are just gorgeous... and the words go so well... with both photo and form...
I wondered at the third 'quiet' which reads:
[Quite] streets,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,
(should this be quiet?)
Well written, as always,
Cat
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
-
Thank you Cat. I considered the saunter as a very slow cruise. But I did misspell quiet. It just my dyslexia.
Comment from robyn corum
1.) create some sights to gaze.
(Quiet?) streets,
Tom,
A sweet swan's song of Fall! I enjoyed!
Favorite lines:
as lawns carpeted in brand new gown,
when fallen foliage came to set the ground aflame,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,
where passengers exclaim and satisfy their aim
to observe Nature's wonders that crown
the best of autumn days.
Quiet streets.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
|
1.) create some sights to gaze.
(Quiet?) streets,
Tom,
A sweet swan's song of Fall! I enjoyed!
Favorite lines:
as lawns carpeted in brand new gown,
when fallen foliage came to set the ground aflame,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,
where passengers exclaim and satisfy their aim
to observe Nature's wonders that crown
the best of autumn days.
Quiet streets.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
-
Thank you Robyn. I fixed it. Glad you liked those lines.
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a great form
There is a typo....Quite streets,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,....Quiet streets
Well penned enjoyable read
God bless
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
|
This is a great form
There is a typo....Quite streets,
as cars on the byways
saunter down the roads of renown,....Quiet streets
Well penned enjoyable read
God bless
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
-
Thanks kiwijenny, fixed it.
Comment from patcelaw
Treischel this write is lovely. I have not yet don one of this format. . Right now I would have to study the format quite a while to achieve it. Patricia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
|
Treischel this write is lovely. I have not yet don one of this format. . Right now I would have to study the format quite a while to achieve it. Patricia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
-
Thank you Patricia. It is very complex.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This sure is a nicer scene than the ice storm we got in Nebraaska on Thanksgiving - your snow is even better than ice.
Lovely poem in wonderful form.
teresa
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
|
This sure is a nicer scene than the ice storm we got in Nebraaska on Thanksgiving - your snow is even better than ice.
Lovely poem in wonderful form.
teresa
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
-
Thank you Teresa. Yes, I'm glad we got snow, not ice.
