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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading you Christmas poetry contest entry. This is a very strong entry and I am sure it will show good. I am glad you left Christ in Christmas. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Barbara. Not all want Christ in Christmas. The first two reviews earned 4 stars. But thanks for your good wishes and respectful review.
    Nicole
Comment from Ulla
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This is a lovely Christmas poem that put the true meaning of it into focus. I liked it and its message. A good entry, and good luck. All best. Ulla

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Ulla.
    Nicole
Comment from ann marie mazz
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hello

yes
you give back the true meaning of christmas
the words and ryhme flow
the formatting and layout are wonderful
the ending line reveals it all
well done in its entirety
the presentation is lovely
the entry has met the challenge

thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Ann Marie.
    Nicole
reply by ann marie mazz on 28-Nov-2015
    you're most welcome nicole
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Excellent entry. It's about time we put Christ back in his holiday. The war on Christmas is a tragedy, and Christians need to fight it in evry way they can, beginning with their votes!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Amen!
    This poem annoyed the first two reviewers; they gave it 4 stars.
    Nicole
reply by Phyllis Stewart on 28-Nov-2015
    A sad sign of the times. :(
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Nicole

_ Excellent Christmas poem entry for the contest.
_ Beautifully presented for the occasion.
_ Good luck.

* Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to you and yours*

Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline<>Jackie<>Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Jax.
    Nicole
Comment from Annette Gulliver
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A great poem for the Christmas Poetry contest, Nicole.
Beautiful photo of a grand church, decked out to celebrate Christmas.
Your words convey a feeling of togetherness with family and fellow man that renews our faith in God in this troubled world.
Annette

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Annette, for your kind and respectful review.
    Nicole
Comment from Jay Squires
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What a tender, faith-filled poem, Nicole. I particularly enjoyed your Christmas Greeting to your readers. I'm not much used to you writing poetry. This is a good one. Merry Christmas to you as well.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Jay, for your respectful review.
    Nicole
Comment from Ricky1024
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Christ's Birth is a time to celebrate...
'Christ's worth...
'And all that He does for us all...
'Each and every day...
'As We worship Him...
'On this and Christmas...
'Day...
Thanks again,
Ricky1024

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you.
Comment from redrocklover
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This was an uplifting and joyful poem about Christmas. Too often people forget the real meaning of Christmas.

Good luck with this entry into the contest.
Linda

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Linda.
    Nicole
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, curly, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the glory of Christmas that needs to be remembered once again and put Christ back in Christmas, I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Sweetwoodjax! Your kind review is balm to my soul. May God bless you.
    Nicole