Where are You
Too Late?5 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Good story about a pet-we all love them so dearly and it's horrible when they age. I'm sure most can identify with this in some way. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Good story about a pet-we all love them so dearly and it's horrible when they age. I'm sure most can identify with this in some way. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for your review. All best. Ulla
Comment from Realist101
So glad kitty came home! This is the story of my Casey. Tho he disappeared trying to follow us on a walk one day. It took him six days, but one night, there he was...meowing at the house beneath a security light. :) Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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So glad kitty came home! This is the story of my Casey. Tho he disappeared trying to follow us on a walk one day. It took him six days, but one night, there he was...meowing at the house beneath a security light. :) Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much. It was just a wee tale from an everyday situation. Everything was fiction bar Charlie, one of our treasured cats. All the best. Ulla
Comment from trumby
Typos- "Dirty diches" "zink" The cat is obviously an important part of the family. Good build-up of suspense though.
With the way that the story was going, I was more than half expecting to find the cat's body in the final reel. Cold & dead
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Typos- "Dirty diches" "zink" The cat is obviously an important part of the family. Good build-up of suspense though.
With the way that the story was going, I was more than half expecting to find the cat's body in the final reel. Cold & dead
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much, and I have corrected my silly mistakes,. Thanks for pointing them out. All best. Ulla
Comment from Curly Girly
On the whole, this was a well written story about a fairly ordinary event. Best wishes in the contest.
Suggestions:
* It is not good writing practice to start sentences with 'but'. You have done it twice in a short space:
But a wee sign of
But, the thing was that
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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On the whole, this was a well written story about a fairly ordinary event. Best wishes in the contest.
Suggestions:
* It is not good writing practice to start sentences with 'but'. You have done it twice in a short space:
But a wee sign of
But, the thing was that
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Thanks a lot Nicole, It was just something that came to me and I dotted it down. You are right and I have ammended. All best. Ulla
Comment from Jacob Collins
I didn't expect Charlie to be a cat in the beginning so that was a nice surprise but perhaps I should've played closer attention to the picture. I enjoyed reading this story and I thought it was well written, I couldn't spot any errors. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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I didn't expect Charlie to be a cat in the beginning so that was a nice surprise but perhaps I should've played closer attention to the picture. I enjoyed reading this story and I thought it was well written, I couldn't spot any errors. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much Jacob. I'm pleased that you liked it. All best. Ulla
