The Royal Clock Tower Mourns
A solemn tribute for Paris Attacks.27 total reviews
Comment from LanceHill
Amen to your prayer. It is sad these cowards attack in the manner they do. Unfortunately here in the US we have a president that refuses to call them what they are, cowards and terrorist. Many tears have been shed throughout the world. God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Amen to your prayer. It is sad these cowards attack in the manner they do. Unfortunately here in the US we have a president that refuses to call them what they are, cowards and terrorist. Many tears have been shed throughout the world. God bless.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Thank You, LanceHill
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very well written piece Lynar. I think it is amazing how you were able to describe the dastardly events that took place : The Eagles of Death Metal Show, the senseless and sadistic shootings that took place at that concert that either wounded or slaughtered many innocent Parisians. This was very profound especially the last sentence where you spoke about " The Net" which to me is terrorism because once a nation like France has suffered from an act such as this it makes it almost impossible for them to live a carefree and joyful life knowing that their will be a possibly that they may be attacked again. Awesome poem!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Very well written piece Lynar. I think it is amazing how you were able to describe the dastardly events that took place : The Eagles of Death Metal Show, the senseless and sadistic shootings that took place at that concert that either wounded or slaughtered many innocent Parisians. This was very profound especially the last sentence where you spoke about " The Net" which to me is terrorism because once a nation like France has suffered from an act such as this it makes it almost impossible for them to live a carefree and joyful life knowing that their will be a possibly that they may be attacked again. Awesome poem!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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It is very sad when we feel a lost of freedom by simply enjoying our lives.
Thank You, Justin Chopin.
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You're welcome.
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Thanks.
Comment from William Ross
Nice, very nice in deed. A great tribute on the Paris attack. well written and thought out. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Nice, very nice in deed. A great tribute on the Paris attack. well written and thought out. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Thank You, William Ross.
Comment from fafa
really good the style and the photo thatseems to be a part of the writing, bigmemory to the offenses congratulationsand Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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really good the style and the photo thatseems to be a part of the writing, bigmemory to the offenses congratulationsand Merry Christmas
Comment Written 12-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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Thank You, fafa.
Comment from tfawcus
Words of comfort to the bereaved never go amiss and it is good to record this tragic event in verse. We should not allow it to be forgotten. Good use of double meaning in the final line.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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Words of comfort to the bereaved never go amiss and it is good to record this tragic event in verse. We should not allow it to be forgotten. Good use of double meaning in the final line.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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Thank You, tfawcus.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A well written and affecting piece depicting a tragic scene. This is becoming an all to familiar occurrence in today's society, and there are no answers.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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Hi there,
A well written and affecting piece depicting a tragic scene. This is becoming an all to familiar occurrence in today's society, and there are no answers.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 12-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2015
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Yes, answers we do need to find for struggling humanity.
Thank You, giraffmang.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, lynar, you did an excellent job writing this nonet poem about the paris attacks and the devastation left behind. did you mean several shots instead of serial shots and their attackers instead of there attackers?
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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this is an excellent write, lynar, you did an excellent job writing this nonet poem about the paris attacks and the devastation left behind. did you mean several shots instead of serial shots and their attackers instead of there attackers?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you. I did mean serial shots were fired. sweetwoodjax.
Comment from ronnie k
Received the message but most of all bathed in its deliver, the poems structure give a precise, enjoyable read, that even with its tragic message gave and pleasure in reading and reviewing.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Received the message but most of all bathed in its deliver, the poems structure give a precise, enjoyable read, that even with its tragic message gave and pleasure in reading and reviewing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank You, ronnie K
Comment from write hand blue
An appropriate poem to remember the victims of this heinous act. At least that is what I interpret it as. I like the animated picture.
:) Mel.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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An appropriate poem to remember the victims of this heinous act. At least that is what I interpret it as. I like the animated picture.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Yes. it is in tribute memory. Thank You, write hand blue.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It mirrors the times we live in, in such a sad manner. It flows well. I see the many terrorist attacks around the world throught this piece. Good job and good luck.
Maii mai
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting piece. It mirrors the times we live in, in such a sad manner. It flows well. I see the many terrorist attacks around the world throught this piece. Good job and good luck.
Maii mai
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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Thank You, Mai Mai
