Rememberance Day
We remember the fallen in all wars today.15 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I like how you describe in poetic form the various wars and the war yet to come. Your vivid use of words reminds the reader of the horror of war and the sacrifices made.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I like how you describe in poetic form the various wars and the war yet to come. Your vivid use of words reminds the reader of the horror of war and the sacrifices made.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for reading. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Kay,
You are absolutely right we will remember them. From shore to shore we will remember. What a wonderful poem you penned. Thank you for allowing me to read your work.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Kay,
You are absolutely right we will remember them. From shore to shore we will remember. What a wonderful poem you penned. Thank you for allowing me to read your work.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Sorry for the delay, it is the silly season. Thanks for reading my friend Darlene. Blessings from me XX
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
A very nice poem for the veterans of war. You take us through a history ride summarizing the three world war, the three hasn't happened yet, I hope it never does. The poem is well written in free verse style. The presentation is stunning. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
A very nice poem for the veterans of war. You take us through a history ride summarizing the three world war, the three hasn't happened yet, I hope it never does. The poem is well written in free verse style. The presentation is stunning. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much Gypsy! XX
Comment from l.raven
HI Kay, you have such a way with words...your description makes you see, feel the pain these men and women went through...I hate war...sooooooooo very interesting...and so very well written...God Bless all who have died...and those who fought and lived... Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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HI Kay, you have such a way with words...your description makes you see, feel the pain these men and women went through...I hate war...sooooooooo very interesting...and so very well written...God Bless all who have died...and those who fought and lived... Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 12-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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I luff you too (and Santa of course) kay.steward@yahoo.com.au if you need me. :-} XX
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thank you sweet girl...xxoo
Comment from DLyons
Poetry and me don't always match. I have never done much, but I enjoyed the description of the wars. My family has been in every one, with one death in WW2. Of course we haven't yet entered WW3. Nicely written. Diana
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Poetry and me don't always match. I have never done much, but I enjoyed the description of the wars. My family has been in every one, with one death in WW2. Of course we haven't yet entered WW3. Nicely written. Diana
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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G'day Diana, Man has always been at war. My father served for three years in New Guinea; he was an ANZAC. These men were famous, (Australia and New Zealand Army Corps.) Thanks for reading, don't give up on your poetry, it has taken me years on Fanstory. I didn't know what poetry was!! Cheers, Kay.
Comment from TigerShelby
I enjoyed your very well written poem. I like the to be continued part. It was a very easy read, and tugged at my heartstrings with all the emotion from the visualization of the pain and suffering they endured. Thank you for allowing me to read your work, honoring all of our brave warriors!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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I enjoyed your very well written poem. I like the to be continued part. It was a very easy read, and tugged at my heartstrings with all the emotion from the visualization of the pain and suffering they endured. Thank you for allowing me to read your work, honoring all of our brave warriors!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Hi there Tiger. Thanks for reading and you keep on writing new friend. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Kay
This painted such a powerful and vivid picture of so many who served their country well and paid the price for freedom. Wonderful post!
Loyd
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hello Kay
This painted such a powerful and vivid picture of so many who served their country well and paid the price for freedom. Wonderful post!
Loyd
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Loyd, Thanks so much for reading, peace will come when He comes again. Blessings, Kay.
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Amen!
Comment from Alan K Pease
Seems we are always in rhe same place of history considering the wars of men remembered among the dead. This time, religion is again an excuse attracting a seemingly righteous cause. This is truly WWW111and it may yet come home to us all. love -Alan
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Seems we are always in rhe same place of history considering the wars of men remembered among the dead. This time, religion is again an excuse attracting a seemingly righteous cause. This is truly WWW111and it may yet come home to us all. love -Alan
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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"We shall not grow old as those that are left grow old. Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn. At the going down of the sun and in the morning - We will remember them." Thanks for reading my friend Alan XX
Comment from Loren (7)
A very thoughtful and frightening thought - but all too obvious to deny. We remember, but forget at the same time. The war to end all wars it seems will never come. That is at least until Christ regains His throne here on earth. Loren
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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A very thoughtful and frightening thought - but all too obvious to deny. We remember, but forget at the same time. The war to end all wars it seems will never come. That is at least until Christ regains His throne here on earth. Loren
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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"We wait in joyful hope for the coming of the Spirit." Thanks so much for reading my friend. Peace, be still. Love, Kay.
Comment from GracieAnn
Ah, me mate.
What a moving tribute to those who gave all for their country. I like the unfamiliar history because it broadens my respect for my precious Aussies. The only thing I saw was that the last line needs an ending quote mark.
Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Ah, me mate.
What a moving tribute to those who gave all for their country. I like the unfamiliar history because it broadens my respect for my precious Aussies. The only thing I saw was that the last line needs an ending quote mark.
Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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G'day Possum, Tanka you for dropping in. I shall fix up the quote mark. Not long until Christmas! Yippee XX Kay.
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Mate,
I love the term of endearment of possum!
:0 GracieAnn
