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Comment from TAB_that's me
Yea! Congratulations Tom! Such joyous news. I hadn't seen this new form done in sonnet form yet but I like it too.
teresa
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Yea! Congratulations Tom! Such joyous news. I hadn't seen this new form done in sonnet form yet but I like it too.
teresa
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you Teresa.
Comment from l.raven
well CONGRATULATIONS great-grandpa...how wonderful Tom...two beautiful ladies...what a wonderful family...I am so happy for you...God Bless on a safe journey...smiling big...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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well CONGRATULATIONS great-grandpa...how wonderful Tom...two beautiful ladies...what a wonderful family...I am so happy for you...God Bless on a safe journey...smiling big...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Luff Linda, for your wonderful comments.
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you are so welcome Tom...xxoo love
Comment from robyn corum
WOW! A great Grandpa! -- And i'm excitedly awaiting the birth of the child that will make me a grandma for the first time! These kids who wait a while these days are killing me! ugh.
Thanks for this one -- and CONGRATS!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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WOW! A great Grandpa! -- And i'm excitedly awaiting the birth of the child that will make me a grandma for the first time! These kids who wait a while these days are killing me! ugh.
Thanks for this one -- and CONGRATS!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Stank you Robyn. Gang in there.
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem! The author's words are filled with joy,
uplifting and creative. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. How exciting the upcoming blessing of a great grandchild!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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An excellent poem! The author's words are filled with joy,
uplifting and creative. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. How exciting the upcoming blessing of a great grandchild!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you harmony.
Comment from I am Cat
Wow! congrats all around, Great Grandpa! ;)
And you used this form to announce it! Wow! exciting!
they are gorgeous! I'm really excited for you!
Your sonnet is lovely... and I'm so honored you've chosen this form!
At any rate... I'm excited for you and your family!
in the first stanza, on the fourth line, I think that if you use an article like 'the' instead of I'm.... it would flow better to complete the sentence that was started in the previous two lines.
;)
also, perhaps not capitalizing all the lines... just the sentence starts?
Other than that, I've really enjoyed this!
Congrats!
Cat
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Wow! congrats all around, Great Grandpa! ;)
And you used this form to announce it! Wow! exciting!
they are gorgeous! I'm really excited for you!
Your sonnet is lovely... and I'm so honored you've chosen this form!
At any rate... I'm excited for you and your family!
in the first stanza, on the fourth line, I think that if you use an article like 'the' instead of I'm.... it would flow better to complete the sentence that was started in the previous two lines.
;)
also, perhaps not capitalizing all the lines... just the sentence starts?
Other than that, I've really enjoyed this!
Congrats!
Cat
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you Cat. I also posted this to show the resemblance of Nicole to your daughter.
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By the way. I took all your suggestions, thanks.
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Awesome, you're very welcome. ;)
Congrats!
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I like that, Tom... looks great! :)
Comment from Pantygynt
I hope you're not feeling too old, these days. And that you should celebrate with the form I created - er - well sort of created thanks to I am Cat. We are both thrilled on our separate sides of the pond.
Full marks for the sonnet too Tom. Great news. I can't think of a better use for my last six of the week.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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I hope you're not feeling too old, these days. And that you should celebrate with the form I created - er - well sort of created thanks to I am Cat. We are both thrilled on our separate sides of the pond.
Full marks for the sonnet too Tom. Great news. I can't think of a better use for my last six of the week.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt, ah geezer that circle of life is catching up to me.
Comment from twinklepoems
Congratulations! Great news! I can tell your "in love" with LyriCat Sonnet but I am starting to miss some of your more lyrical pieces! I like your line, "putting a new living soul" and "when she takes on mother's roll." Look forward to more when the baby is here!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Congratulations! Great news! I can tell your "in love" with LyriCat Sonnet but I am starting to miss some of your more lyrical pieces! I like your line, "putting a new living soul" and "when she takes on mother's roll." Look forward to more when the baby is here!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Ethan's you twinklepoems. Me too
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Congratulations on the good news. Great new forms of poetry invented. Your excitement and pride shows clearly in your well presented words.
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Congratulations on the good news. Great new forms of poetry invented. Your excitement and pride shows clearly in your well presented words.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you Sandra. But I'm too young to be great-grandpa.
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We are never too old to be a great grand parent. You trained your children well, I only have two grand kids the boy 8 and the girl 6 and it doesn't look like I going to get any more soon. Congratulations again.
Comment from patcelaw
Treischel, how 'bout them apples you gonna be a great grand pappy. Congrats.
mother roll-Every place you use this term don't you mean mother role?
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Treischel, how 'bout them apples you gonna be a great grand pappy. Congrats.
mother roll-Every place you use this term don't you mean mother role?
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you Patricia. Oops, yup. Can't believe I did that.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
congratul;ations, treischel, she's a beautiful girl and I know you are going to be a proud great grandpa, I enjoyed reading this sonnet version of the lyricat. shouldn't it be role instead of roll?
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congratul;ations, treischel, she's a beautiful girl and I know you are going to be a proud great grandpa, I enjoyed reading this sonnet version of the lyricat. shouldn't it be role instead of roll?
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thank you sweetwoodjax. Indeed it should. Oops, missed that, but now fixed.
