Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Debbie

_ Indeed, I agree--bad taste.
_ Pink hair--purple hair--YUK
- Well said and presented.
_ Cool artwork.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

Both your short Senryu poem and your picture are cute.
"Bad taste never goes out of style" seems to say it all. It just doesn't make sense to me that people wear pajama bottoms out shopping and jeans to Church. Bad taste seems to be the fashion of the day.
Really cute.
I didn't see any errors or corrections.
Joyce 11-7-15

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

I agree. Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

We see a lot of pink hair lately due to the issue of breast cancer support. Thus, in this case, I think it's in good taste. -Bill

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Yes, very appropriate in that case--I agree. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

I love it! ... (Not the pink hair, but your verse!) .....
pink wig?
bad taste never goes
out of style
Brilliant! And very clever.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from snooker155

Excellent

brilliant until I read your author's note I thought you had got the rules of writing senryu all wrong but I was wrong and I am humbled by your valiant effort congratulations from snooker155xx

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

LOL.
I actually like pink hair. For many it suits their style. You found the perfect picture for your senryu.
Your 5/7/5 has perfect syllable count.
Glad to see you back on site.

ellen

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from Irish Goat

Excellent

nice sneery. great adherence to the satirical intent. Nice corresponding photo as well. Kind of drives your central theme home. Good job. You did a lot with precious little

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

reply by Irish Goat on 07-Nov-2015

I really need to start proofing my reviews. should read "Nice senryu" not sneery as written. Loves me some auto-correct....

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

hahahahahaha

This is a fun poem - a great senryu. I love this form and love to see one done well. Thanks for sharing -- btw, you should have entered it into the senryu contest going now~!

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

I tend to forget to check the contests. Thank you, glad you enjoyed my friend~Debbie

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Hahaha. Absolutely. I couldn't agree more. Bad taste never goes out of style. Unfortunately, most of the weird hair colors today can't be taken off and thrown in the closet at night. Good Senryu, Debbie. Love your humor.

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015

Thanks,Jay. I couldn't resist. And it does some bad taste goes on and on. Take care, my friend~Debbie