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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from alvina224224
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Such a direct and meaningful piece of poetry, with stark and emotional art work. Congratulations, author. Also, I admire you for taking on the Lyricat formula.
The educational side of Fan Story, complemented by the contests, makes for one of the best writing sites on the internet, I think. Good luck in thhe contest

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
    Thank you Alvina. It is a very good site.
Comment from ericawrites
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a really beautiful poem and a wonderful tribute to all those who gave their lives fighting for our freedom , all over the world. Perfect syllable count. Good luck in the contest, I think you may have a winner here.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
    Thank you ericawrites.