Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Riding Rainbows"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
28 total reviews
Comment from SFattempt
I literally just said wow after reading this. I think is absolutely beautiful. Theres a lot of strong feelings in this, thats been said in a way that can help the reader to relate or feel the moment thats being said in this beautiful piece.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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I literally just said wow after reading this. I think is absolutely beautiful. Theres a lot of strong feelings in this, thats been said in a way that can help the reader to relate or feel the moment thats being said in this beautiful piece.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Comment from Ulla
This is beautiful lament to a lost love. I really liked it and it so well written. I can almost imagine music to be added. Well done. All the best, Ulla
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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This is beautiful lament to a lost love. I really liked it and it so well written. I can almost imagine music to be added. Well done. All the best, Ulla
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Comment from Teri7
My friend I wish I had six stars for this great piece. I am assuming it is a song. It would make a wonderful country song. I could easily relate tot he wording on this. Great descriptive wording and imagery. I love the rainbow picture you used with this. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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My friend I wish I had six stars for this great piece. I am assuming it is a song. It would make a wonderful country song. I could easily relate tot he wording on this. Great descriptive wording and imagery. I love the rainbow picture you used with this. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 02-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Just keep on writing as I would love to tell my friends. I knew him when. hugs, Teri
Comment from BOO ghost
Tonight I'm riding rainbows that always go away
Looking for tomorrow in every yesterday
This kind of looks like the first line of a song. And it rhymes. Maybe at the end of the rainbow is a bucket of gold. You reap your harvest from seeds sown in the sickle & rye. Seeds not planted deep into the soil do not germinate. Basically, you can conclude many scenarios based on that sentence at the top. Cute tale, here. Nice imagination and spirit. BOO
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Tonight I'm riding rainbows that always go away
Looking for tomorrow in every yesterday
This kind of looks like the first line of a song. And it rhymes. Maybe at the end of the rainbow is a bucket of gold. You reap your harvest from seeds sown in the sickle & rye. Seeds not planted deep into the soil do not germinate. Basically, you can conclude many scenarios based on that sentence at the top. Cute tale, here. Nice imagination and spirit. BOO
Comment Written 02-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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These are lyrics. Glad you enjoyed them.
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yep, if you stress the conjoined words--it reads like a song
Comment from Serendipity!
This is beautiful written. Is there a tune with it? Believe it or not, I'm totally not into music except the Christian kind, but I'd assume this is what they call the country and western style?? Man if you've been happily married for fifteen solid years why don't you sing her praises? : )
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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This is beautiful written. Is there a tune with it? Believe it or not, I'm totally not into music except the Christian kind, but I'd assume this is what they call the country and western style?? Man if you've been happily married for fifteen solid years why don't you sing her praises? : )
Comment Written 02-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Country music is three chords and the truth. And, in Country music sad, pitiful, and morbid are what sells. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Brett, No a bad piece, flowed well and told a sad story of your lost love and lonely heart. I liked you Riding Rainbows theme and the lines referenced to this as they were just enough enhance you story .Well done with this one Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Hi Brett, No a bad piece, flowed well and told a sad story of your lost love and lonely heart. I liked you Riding Rainbows theme and the lines referenced to this as they were just enough enhance you story .Well done with this one Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Comment from AnnaLinda
Brett,
Yes, this does read like a song. I like the entry line and how you repeated it at the
end...also the riding rainbow line with 'tonight' then again with 'now'
I believe the words-lyrics are appealing to many. I did enjoy the rhymes within it,
as you placed them.
A pleasure to read and review,
Linda
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Brett,
Yes, this does read like a song. I like the entry line and how you repeated it at the
end...also the riding rainbow line with 'tonight' then again with 'now'
I believe the words-lyrics are appealing to many. I did enjoy the rhymes within it,
as you placed them.
A pleasure to read and review,
Linda
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is another well written poem that held me mesmerized through the whole poem. Only one line I had to read several times, which was: Nothing that I know of keeps my feet here on the ground. I couldn't get what you meant by "know of keeps" at first and thought, "Nothing that I know will keep my feet upon the ground" sounded better, but that's just me. ( ;
Kat
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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Hi Brett,
This is another well written poem that held me mesmerized through the whole poem. Only one line I had to read several times, which was: Nothing that I know of keeps my feet here on the ground. I couldn't get what you meant by "know of keeps" at first and thought, "Nothing that I know will keep my feet upon the ground" sounded better, but that's just me. ( ;
Kat
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2015
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I always like your work. You're very talented. Kat
Comment from Dean Kuch
Such a glorious piece of photo art to accompany your poignant poetic proclamations portraying pain, loneliness and sorrow, Brett. It's quite easy to see why these lyrics have received the accolades here they have thus far.
This also hit pretty close to home for me personally, buddy. I nearly had to stop reading it...
Great work with this one.
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Such a glorious piece of photo art to accompany your poignant poetic proclamations portraying pain, loneliness and sorrow, Brett. It's quite easy to see why these lyrics have received the accolades here they have thus far.
This also hit pretty close to home for me personally, buddy. I nearly had to stop reading it...
Great work with this one.
~Dean
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Apologize for touching on a sore nerve, my friend. Glad you enjoyed this. Your comments and support are always welcome here. Lost love, for whatever reason, is something that for many people, simply never really goes away.
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No, it certainly doesn't, Brett.
hey, it only touched a nerve because it was so well written. I can't fault you one bit for that.
Keep keepin' it real, Brett...
~Dean :}
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Will do. Also, want to check out that link you gave me about your books. I do want a copy of them.
Comment from Nosha17
These are excellent lyrics for a disenchanted lover. I can see these set to music. Excellent rhyming and well expressed thoughts. Most enjoyable. faye
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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These are excellent lyrics for a disenchanted lover. I can see these set to music. Excellent rhyming and well expressed thoughts. Most enjoyable. faye
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
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