Yes You Can
Advise for someone to start believing46 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Well i to agree with this poem. It covers so much more than abuse though. Believing in yourself is the most important aspect of any thing you wish to do. Well done.
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Well i to agree with this poem. It covers so much more than abuse though. Believing in yourself is the most important aspect of any thing you wish to do. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from TPAC
Writer in my opinion can't state this concept any better in my opinion desiring exceptional which I can write. Inspiring write.
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Writer in my opinion can't state this concept any better in my opinion desiring exceptional which I can write. Inspiring write.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from patcelaw
What a powerful message to those of us who were abused. It is my prayer that all who have been abused will be able to get past their past and to know they are of value to God and that He can heal them. Patricia
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What a powerful message to those of us who were abused. It is my prayer that all who have been abused will be able to get past their past and to know they are of value to God and that He can heal them. Patricia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from gamay
Hi Friend.
This is very nice and wonderful poem.
"dance in your own bright moonlight
don't doubt that you'll achieve
rise up and own your moment
all you need is to believe!"
I like that words .Well done my friend.
Good luck.
Happy Halloween.
gamay
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Hi Friend.
This is very nice and wonderful poem.
"dance in your own bright moonlight
don't doubt that you'll achieve
rise up and own your moment
all you need is to believe!"
I like that words .Well done my friend.
Good luck.
Happy Halloween.
gamay
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a beautiful and encouraging believe poem. It is cheerful and hopeful. It is well rhymed but what matters most are your inspiring words of comfort. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
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This is a beautiful and encouraging believe poem. It is cheerful and hopeful. It is well rhymed but what matters most are your inspiring words of comfort. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Yes You Can, has a terrific self-affirming message that comes pleasantly through the nicely metered iambic heptameter poetic lines. Cute picture as well.
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This poem, Yes You Can, has a terrific self-affirming message that comes pleasantly through the nicely metered iambic heptameter poetic lines. Cute picture as well.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
