The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Smaller Heavens Pleasure"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from Cinda
I don't know if you remember me but I first met you here on Fan Story when you first signed up in September 2011...I decided to move on and things are much better now and decided to come back...I am a fan of yours from that year...Your poem is beautifully expressed about how a woman can fill ones life with joy and ease...The ballerina moves across the screen with such ease and poise...Thank you, for sharing your romantic poem of beauty and love for our creator...Cinda :~)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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I don't know if you remember me but I first met you here on Fan Story when you first signed up in September 2011...I decided to move on and things are much better now and decided to come back...I am a fan of yours from that year...Your poem is beautifully expressed about how a woman can fill ones life with joy and ease...The ballerina moves across the screen with such ease and poise...Thank you, for sharing your romantic poem of beauty and love for our creator...Cinda :~)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Hi Cinda...-smile- ...oh wow...I've changed....so much has happened since then...Well I'm glad you're back. thank you Cinda for enjoying. Have a freat night. love Michael
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: I've never seen such a gathering of words which better describe the grace and beauty of a ballerina. Either you are writing more clearly or I am finding your words more transparent . . .
I'm not feeling so good these days. Had to crank up my oxygen another notch and the fatigue has stepped up its notch. Barely doing anything. Uno is still busy with family. Don't know when I will see her. I just hope I can get to that place where that name is etched because it will be as close as I will ever be to him.
Take care of yourself. Soft Thunder
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Michael: I've never seen such a gathering of words which better describe the grace and beauty of a ballerina. Either you are writing more clearly or I am finding your words more transparent . . .
I'm not feeling so good these days. Had to crank up my oxygen another notch and the fatigue has stepped up its notch. Barely doing anything. Uno is still busy with family. Don't know when I will see her. I just hope I can get to that place where that name is etched because it will be as close as I will ever be to him.
Take care of yourself. Soft Thunder
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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If I were a millionaire i'd buy you so much you'd know i loved you. I'd wrap you in gifts warm as Christmas, then kiss your face pain free precious. If only I were a millionaire you'd know how much i loved you. She's coming Linda....love you Michael
Comment from daeneam
Hello, dear Michael!
It's been a while... I haven't upgraded my membership yet as I don't have so much time to spend on the site... Just checking if you're always in great shape. Be safe... lovelots! c", Mae
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Hello, dear Michael!
It's been a while... I haven't upgraded my membership yet as I don't have so much time to spend on the site... Just checking if you're always in great shape. Be safe... lovelots! c", Mae
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Hello Professor Beautiful...-smile- sure miss you....hope you're not working too much. thank you for checking on me Mae....-smile- big love Michael
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, very beautiful...didn't know you could speak French...the wording...comforting to the ear....and your artwork speak of your poem...I love Mona Lisa curves a woman so beautiful...manifested awe most nirvana...truly your own unique style...so very beautifully written baby...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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HI Michael, very beautiful...didn't know you could speak French...the wording...comforting to the ear....and your artwork speak of your poem...I love Mona Lisa curves a woman so beautiful...manifested awe most nirvana...truly your own unique style...so very beautifully written baby...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Alright...they she is...Hello Wonderstruck....-smile-. yes yes I took a crash course in French Ballerina....I reworked this one into a masterpiece of perfection...pulitzer contender i'm sure...-wink- thank you dear...love you michael
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you learned it well...your welcome dear...do you??? xxoo
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I will always love you linda...you know that...-smile-
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and I love you as well...
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem, my friend. Full of sorrow and with a hint of sadness compounded with wistfulness. I liked the picture as it added to the poems tone a lot. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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This is a good poem, my friend. Full of sorrow and with a hint of sadness compounded with wistfulness. I liked the picture as it added to the poems tone a lot. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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well Hello there...-smile- thanks man...I've changed it by now...been playing a lot with this one...or it me...cant tell anymore. yea yea...always go for the whole packaged experience...picture, life-show and song...-wink- love michael
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed the poem and the picture of the ballerina. I like best the last two lines as follows: graceful serves me, you wellspring cool water offering, soothing's slower dancer. All the best.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed the poem and the picture of the ballerina. I like best the last two lines as follows: graceful serves me, you wellspring cool water offering, soothing's slower dancer. All the best.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Well thank you so much...It's been raining...I've played this one out i'm afraid. thanks again. love michael
Comment from His Grayness
Fully worth six stars for this fine work but apparently too late in the process to have such to offer! This is another delightful work from this brilliant and unique Author who always stimulates our thinking and challenges our insights in all that he delivers! Congratulations on another fine work! Vance
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Fully worth six stars for this fine work but apparently too late in the process to have such to offer! This is another delightful work from this brilliant and unique Author who always stimulates our thinking and challenges our insights in all that he delivers! Congratulations on another fine work! Vance
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Well Hello Vance...-smile- yea I've changed it now, it sings a lil' better. love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
I always enjoy your subtle references--in this poem, the ballet images, Mona Lisa and Adam's rib! The striking pictures and the repeat of the first stanza are very effective. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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I always enjoy your subtle references--in this poem, the ballet images, Mona Lisa and Adam's rib! The striking pictures and the repeat of the first stanza are very effective. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hey J...-smile- ...how are you sweeter side of cherry pie. Oh...yea...I put a bunch more in there now...its a French frenzy I tell ya...-wink- love Michael
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Enjoy the pumpkin pie too with All Hallows' Eve. We live on a hill and up thirty-two stairs--so, all's quiet on the Western front! More hugs- Joan
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thirty two...my goodness we need an elevator. I love pumpkin pie...warm with a scope of vanilla...scrumpalisious....love-
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We actually have a funicular--an outdoor elevator. We also cheated and had pumpkin pie today--Bob earned it since he had a colonoscopy--I just took advantage of the opportunity! Smiles- Joan
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oh my God that poor man.....Jesus Bob I'm so sorry...-headshake-...yea yea give him the whole thing, by all means he deserves it. Hang in there man-
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Fortunately, unlike me he does not grow polyps and the procedure only took a little more than an hour--he's already recovered and doesn't have to have another for 10 years. Thanks for commiserating. Take good care of yourself- Joan
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are you sure polyps and pumpkin pie are compatible J...and does Bob know you're telegraphing his horrific experience all over the world wide net....I'm just saying, people take pictures now a days...easy does it...-wink-
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Ooops--too much information. I guess I'm just relieved he's doing so well. Off to dreamland- Joan
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Ooops--too much information. I guess I'm just relieved he's doing so well. Off to dreamland- Joan
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humor me J...pretend like you think I'm funny...its been a long day....night night-
Comment from I am Cat
Hello Michael,
I like the way this wraps around on itself, as if pirouetting and sashaying about...
as she walks in beauty like the night...;)
your beginning and ending stanzas are lovely:
graceful serves me-
well spring cool water offering
inviting soothing's slower dancer
Yes, I do believe graceful does serve you. ;)
you do have a way with words:
Mona Lisa curves a woman beautiful
indeed.
Another lovely and very romantic piece from you. I'd expect no less.
Well done.
Cat (how do you hang on to sixes so long?) Oh, that's right... I live here, don't I? ;)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hello Michael,
I like the way this wraps around on itself, as if pirouetting and sashaying about...
as she walks in beauty like the night...;)
your beginning and ending stanzas are lovely:
graceful serves me-
well spring cool water offering
inviting soothing's slower dancer
Yes, I do believe graceful does serve you. ;)
you do have a way with words:
Mona Lisa curves a woman beautiful
indeed.
Another lovely and very romantic piece from you. I'd expect no less.
Well done.
Cat (how do you hang on to sixes so long?) Oh, that's right... I live here, don't I? ;)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hello Tiger....I've changed it now...it reads way better. are you mad at me...? Surely you know i'm not a supporter of the slave trade. Hello...? ah -smile- thank you Dear, glad you liked it. love Michael
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Mad at you? No way!! You're far too adorable. ;)
It's all in fun... meow.. ;)
I've been writing... but I"m back..
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swwwooo jeez thats two close calls too close together. Good...you shouldn't be. -smile- love-
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Two close calls? meaning?
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oh I...I was "being funny" with another friend and...she...well she thought I was being mean or something and...made me sweat...swallow hard stuff like that...no big deal ...to girls like you...evidently....-smile-
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(((((( perhaps you worry too much? )))))
that's why social media isn't always the best form of communication. Vocal inflections are lost... and I think that something in the conversation and the way a person speaks to someone else is lost as well... the teasing tone, the slight smile, the 'head nod' that you so sweetly do... yeah, those things. those are lost. And so people don't always know whether or not someone is joking... I can tell you this...
I RARELY ever get pissed off. I'm pretty easy going... even if I rant... it's a blow off and it's over. It's usually just a poof of passion and it's just a way of saying what's on my mind. Not meant to hurt, just a way of putting off steam. So if you have a doubt, ask. But chances are, I"m not pissed. ;) I just don't get that way and If I hurt your feelings, please tell me... because I would never do it on purpose... honestly, I"m not that person. It's just all in fun. I promise you. ok? ;)
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you got girlfriend...-smile-...I know...when I first came it was even harder to decipher motive and intent..but i'd thought I'd mastered it...that is until recently...-smile- Well this is a learning site...you better believe it...-wink- love-
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I suppose people have different reasons for being here. ah well. as I always say, "not my pig, not my farm." ;)
mwah
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motives change...and strangers become friends... but the writing is always the same root...that connects so many. I think...-smile-
Comment from Ricky1024
I have read this piece I feel a presence it begins with the spins witch interesting enough redirect it try to get it to stay in one spot so I can infected with my own delirious thoughts seems to not want to cooperate I'm skipping skipping our worship song hold on I get back to you DePalma's are full of religious aspects combined with the the power that Shelby the waters play a great car imagery is this is appropriate here not quite as deep as you usually go Michael with this as well I only offer to the 5 because I get no 6 is that I used them up so I really enjoyed it and of course always the artwork in the UM music behind it is added to the benefit healing in a hospital bed connected to the world by a phone resetting my own poetry and poems reading two books which will be completed before I leave an egg. Of less than 3 weeks broken pieces already chapter that is 37 and half way done the religious book or two having entitled yet witch I presented six or eight pieces written in 37 minutes and read after to Mormon elder is witch blew them away it will show that the my religious works or far surpass anything else I can complish here on my writing Spektor I enjoyed this piece of Ricky 1024 healing
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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I have read this piece I feel a presence it begins with the spins witch interesting enough redirect it try to get it to stay in one spot so I can infected with my own delirious thoughts seems to not want to cooperate I'm skipping skipping our worship song hold on I get back to you DePalma's are full of religious aspects combined with the the power that Shelby the waters play a great car imagery is this is appropriate here not quite as deep as you usually go Michael with this as well I only offer to the 5 because I get no 6 is that I used them up so I really enjoyed it and of course always the artwork in the UM music behind it is added to the benefit healing in a hospital bed connected to the world by a phone resetting my own poetry and poems reading two books which will be completed before I leave an egg. Of less than 3 weeks broken pieces already chapter that is 37 and half way done the religious book or two having entitled yet witch I presented six or eight pieces written in 37 minutes and read after to Mormon elder is witch blew them away it will show that the my religious works or far surpass anything else I can complish here on my writing Spektor I enjoyed this piece of Ricky 1024 healing
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hello 10-24....yes. yes it does start with the spin. how perceptive, and ends with quantum leapt. It is in and of itself odyssey...you really aught to...its beautiful 10-24...damndest thing I've ever seen...-sniff-...makes me emotional, thoughts jumbled liar...Cajun recipe lip smack that...-sniff-....yes of course 'before you leave an egg"...let me know, I wish to capture it on film for future examination. Your contribution to medical Science and betterment of our fellow special-ed men is admirable and testament's witness. I salute you 10-24....love 10-4
