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Comment from Pantygynt
This is splendid stuff. The motto attaches to your name so well and the poem with it is excellent. It is a pleasure to agree 100% with the sentiments of your content rather than concentrate on the technicalities of your form. Having said that, the wild freedom of free verse is totally appropriate to your them.
Loved it. Happy hunting.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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This is splendid stuff. The motto attaches to your name so well and the poem with it is excellent. It is a pleasure to agree 100% with the sentiments of your content rather than concentrate on the technicalities of your form. Having said that, the wild freedom of free verse is totally appropriate to your them.
Loved it. Happy hunting.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I can even mount my trophies on the wall, if I want.
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Without the aid of a taxidermist.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great motto to not shoot animals with a rifle but a camera and take trophies with your camera. All other can enjoy too with a little poem to tell a little story about your experience and the shot.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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A great motto to not shoot animals with a rifle but a camera and take trophies with your camera. All other can enjoy too with a little poem to tell a little story about your experience and the shot.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from artemis53
Very well done in your free verse. Don't worry about the contest since it was never to be. Love that you hunt in photographs. They last longer than I'm sure your subjects do even with a full life.
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Very well done in your free verse. Don't worry about the contest since it was never to be. Love that you hunt in photographs. They last longer than I'm sure your subjects do even with a full life.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thank you Artemis. Good point.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Thomas: you have a first name! Thomas, I like your style with the photography. I also take photos of everything. I got a shot of our Husky dog with the Husky cheerleaders playing in the maple leaves. I like the deer, flowers and sunsets. Your poems are welcome home for me up North there in the cities. I was an Uptown Girl on Lake of the Isles. I like how you bring your family on the nature walks.
I skipped the name contest. What would I add to Nancy - naughty and nice? So, too hard and I walked my dogs. See you in another contest. Enjoy the autumn season and the harvest foods. Winter will be here and you can scrap book.
God bless. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thomas: you have a first name! Thomas, I like your style with the photography. I also take photos of everything. I got a shot of our Husky dog with the Husky cheerleaders playing in the maple leaves. I like the deer, flowers and sunsets. Your poems are welcome home for me up North there in the cities. I was an Uptown Girl on Lake of the Isles. I like how you bring your family on the nature walks.
I skipped the name contest. What would I add to Nancy - naughty and nice? So, too hard and I walked my dogs. See you in another contest. Enjoy the autumn season and the harvest foods. Winter will be here and you can scrap book.
God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you Nancy. See, you have a first name too, Uptown Girl. Love the comments. Hope to see a poem with those huskies in.
Comment from flamingstar
Amen to that. I'm surrounded by hunters here in Washington; it's all they talk about, but I couldn't bring myself to shoot a deer or a moose or an elk. They have such regal beauty.
Maybe a snake.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Amen to that. I'm surrounded by hunters here in Washington; it's all they talk about, but I couldn't bring myself to shoot a deer or a moose or an elk. They have such regal beauty.
Maybe a snake.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you flamingstar. Yup, maybe a snake.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Excellent mix of two formats. When reading the second format I thought ...'hmm, where's he going with this talk of shooting!?' Then you hit me with the camera lens. Well done for the twist and this enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Excellent mix of two formats. When reading the second format I thought ...'hmm, where's he going with this talk of shooting!?' Then you hit me with the camera lens. Well done for the twist and this enjoyable read.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you PiemsofDD. Gotcha. Lol.
Comment from I am Cat
Awww... now THIS is AWESOME! This tells me about YOU...
I love this... and I'd just love to give you a hug for this...
((((for being you)))))
That's what I do too... I love to 'shoot'... but not to kill....
just to freeze frame... that's all...
Well done...
I love this Tom... I do.
Great job!
A virtual six for a peek into YOU
Cat
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Awww... now THIS is AWESOME! This tells me about YOU...
I love this... and I'd just love to give you a hug for this...
((((for being you)))))
That's what I do too... I love to 'shoot'... but not to kill....
just to freeze frame... that's all...
Well done...
I love this Tom... I do.
Great job!
A virtual six for a peek into YOU
Cat
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Awwww. That so sweet! Thank you cat.
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Thank you Tom
