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Comment from Jaq Cee
I like the way you transposed the first and last stanzas my friend.
Very intricately woven and rhythmically set. Magdalene seems a beautiful soul.
Hope this finds you well Michael. God bless, Jaq :) xx
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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I like the way you transposed the first and last stanzas my friend.
Very intricately woven and rhythmically set. Magdalene seems a beautiful soul.
Hope this finds you well Michael. God bless, Jaq :) xx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Oh sorry Jaq...I didn't see you....thank you Sweetheart...i'm alright...Hope you're well also....love michael
Comment from Teri7
Michael, You have done a very good job with this poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. The art work you chose went well with this work. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Michael, You have done a very good job with this poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. The art work you chose went well with this work. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi Teri...-smile- ah thank you Dear, always my pleasure....love michael
Comment from ByeByeBirdie
Satisfying as celestial heavens climb effort summits ultimate worship natural actions echoed chime" This is my favorite line in the whole thing. Beauty of chime, and I love how you used celestial to describe the heavens :) -ERC
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Satisfying as celestial heavens climb effort summits ultimate worship natural actions echoed chime" This is my favorite line in the whole thing. Beauty of chime, and I love how you used celestial to describe the heavens :) -ERC
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Why thank you...happy you enjoyed...love Michael
Comment from amada
I like this line the best "summer dress up weather sunshine..." Dear friend, there is always something in your writing that blow me away. This is a original and creative work for Magdalene. Muy bien, amigo! (Great, my friend).
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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I like this line the best "summer dress up weather sunshine..." Dear friend, there is always something in your writing that blow me away. This is a original and creative work for Magdalene. Muy bien, amigo! (Great, my friend).
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi Happy Feet...-smile- haha...so cool....is the summer breeze of your appreciation. Big love Michael
Comment from TomyKan
While I had trouble understanding some of it, your free verse is very well written and the message of beauty is clear. Good rhythm and flow. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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While I had trouble understanding some of it, your free verse is very well written and the message of beauty is clear. Good rhythm and flow. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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well its life time process Tomy...understanding leaves plenty of room to grow into...eat your wheaties and get lots of rest. love Michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
My dear Michael, you have shone again in the eyes of poets everywhere, you certainly know how to use your words perfectly. The purity of Jesus, son of God, is born inside you. To have a glimpse of the celestial peace, to be able to touch it, is rare. You have seen it and touched it, it shows in your writing. Love you, my friend. xxx
I go into hospital on the 9th November, hoping the surgeon will put right his mistake on my knee so I can start to move on with some sort of pain-free life. If you have a moment on that day, would you say a little prayer for me? xxx
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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My dear Michael, you have shone again in the eyes of poets everywhere, you certainly know how to use your words perfectly. The purity of Jesus, son of God, is born inside you. To have a glimpse of the celestial peace, to be able to touch it, is rare. You have seen it and touched it, it shows in your writing. Love you, my friend. xxx
I go into hospital on the 9th November, hoping the surgeon will put right his mistake on my knee so I can start to move on with some sort of pain-free life. If you have a moment on that day, would you say a little prayer for me? xxx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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all day...I will. I'm late for work now...I will be by when I get home...love you Michael
Comment from RGstar
I loved the lyricism of this write, my friend. Good poetic skills in determining the overall meaning.
The message is strong indeed. Your image connected well with the theme. I must admit, lovely though it is...I ha to skroll away from the moving hair...a little phobia about things moving in that manner...spiders, snakes and so forth. ha,ha...secret.
One thing...correct me if I am wrong;
I thought ''pinnacles'' should have a possesive ''s'' there in the context of things ''Pinnacle's'?''
Oh well, its a six from me. Elaborate and expressive.
Well done.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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I loved the lyricism of this write, my friend. Good poetic skills in determining the overall meaning.
The message is strong indeed. Your image connected well with the theme. I must admit, lovely though it is...I ha to skroll away from the moving hair...a little phobia about things moving in that manner...spiders, snakes and so forth. ha,ha...secret.
One thing...correct me if I am wrong;
I thought ''pinnacles'' should have a possesive ''s'' there in the context of things ''Pinnacle's'?''
Oh well, its a six from me. Elaborate and expressive.
Well done.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hey Bro...sorry man , didn't see you until now...always my pleasure to hear from you....-smile- I caught a cooper head in my backyard, picked it up with my bare hands like Steve Irwin...except I didn't start laughing when it bit me. haha Anyway,...yea I'm a lil' leary of them things now...their not very friendly. O okay...I will go fix it. love Michael
Comment from scd41
Your poem is a great tribute to the 'Apostle of Apostles, as she is revered by many. The image is simply superb. I liked the expression 'sweet as puddings sugar high'. The description given is just 'dna'. I could not make out much out of it. An author notes would remove doubts.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Your poem is a great tribute to the 'Apostle of Apostles, as she is revered by many. The image is simply superb. I liked the expression 'sweet as puddings sugar high'. The description given is just 'dna'. I could not make out much out of it. An author notes would remove doubts.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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He saved her life...and she loved Him with it forever on. Yes, she was a fine example of love more than acceptable. DNA...the make up of one as that of real love...or Mary. -smile- love Michael
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Michael, the narrative is reasonably or relatively easy to piece together, I flows quite well, it still remained as cryptic as ever, but the word choice is exceptional, I still like painting word portraits, so well done, I am making a attempt, well done, my interesting friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Beautifully written Michael, the narrative is reasonably or relatively easy to piece together, I flows quite well, it still remained as cryptic as ever, but the word choice is exceptional, I still like painting word portraits, so well done, I am making a attempt, well done, my interesting friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
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Hey Roy...-smile- thank you Sir. ah well we all have unique voice. Appreciate you man....love Michael
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Most welcome Michael,
Comment from Sambangi
Excellent free verse, narrating beauty in its purest form. Few lines, yet very creative. Artwork is wonderful and perfectly fits to the poem
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Excellent free verse, narrating beauty in its purest form. Few lines, yet very creative. Artwork is wonderful and perfectly fits to the poem
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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wow...-smile- thank you for saying so.. love Michael
