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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Magdalene "miscellaneous poems
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Comment from Joan E.
What an animation! I could hear the "music," see the "dance" and smell the "flowers" accompanied by your alliteration of "s's" and "f's". Here's to Gloria- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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What an animation! I could hear the "music," see the "dance" and smell the "flowers" accompanied by your alliteration of "s's" and "f's". Here's to Gloria- Joan
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hey J...-smile- ah well animation and me got thing going on...Mrs Jones went home...-shouldershrug-. haha...love Michael
Comment from frogbook
This was very hauntingly beautiful. I loved the picture you chose with the ever moving veil. It was a great compliment to your lovely rhymes.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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This was very hauntingly beautiful. I loved the picture you chose with the ever moving veil. It was a great compliment to your lovely rhymes.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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well thank you...-smile- glad you enjoyed. love Michael
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent imagery throughout this thought provoking piece. Very creative as you transposed the first and last stanzas. Interesting artwork and the black and white is stunning.
Well done
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Excellent imagery throughout this thought provoking piece. Very creative as you transposed the first and last stanzas. Interesting artwork and the black and white is stunning.
Well done
Janet
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi Janet...-smile- why i thank you Maam...happy you enjoyed it. love Michael
Comment from Zue65
I also enjoyed reviewing this poem, the black background intensified the message the author intended to convey to the readers. I like best the following lines:satisfying as celestial heaven's climb, efforts summits ultimate worship" Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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I also enjoyed reviewing this poem, the black background intensified the message the author intended to convey to the readers. I like best the following lines:satisfying as celestial heaven's climb, efforts summits ultimate worship" Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Why I thank you very much...-smile- i enjoy this. love michael
Comment from ciliverde
Interesting and arresting poem. I like that the first and last stanzas are mirror images of each other.
"satisfying as celestial heavens climb" is a nice line, evoking a beautiful image. "honest essence need not try" feels good too.
Carol
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Interesting and arresting poem. I like that the first and last stanzas are mirror images of each other.
"satisfying as celestial heavens climb" is a nice line, evoking a beautiful image. "honest essence need not try" feels good too.
Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Hey there Carol...-smile- thank you so much. happy you enjoyed. love Michael
Comment from His Grayness
Really-Truly Sorry to be short of six stars at this late reading but this one is sure worth TEN! Beautifully packaged in art and music as always from this greatly talented and truly unique poet with a rare and powerfully creative style! Great Job and thanks for the experience! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Really-Truly Sorry to be short of six stars at this late reading but this one is sure worth TEN! Beautifully packaged in art and music as always from this greatly talented and truly unique poet with a rare and powerfully creative style! Great Job and thanks for the experience! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Ah its my pleasure....a giver of self widens the soul. muchas gracias . love michael
Comment from LeslieP5
I had to come back today and read this again, because you style with its stream of consciousness and unusual thought flow threw me a bit. I get he beauty, sweetness and purity you are trying to portray and I like the "her music permeates heir apparent fragrant as first flowers find" and the way you repeat the first verse at the end. I do still find some of the lines and train of thought perplexing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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I had to come back today and read this again, because you style with its stream of consciousness and unusual thought flow threw me a bit. I get he beauty, sweetness and purity you are trying to portray and I like the "her music permeates heir apparent fragrant as first flowers find" and the way you repeat the first verse at the end. I do still find some of the lines and train of thought perplexing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Amen...so do I...-smile- the poet answers questions owned in between ocean and known peninsula. not everything is understood upon first encounter. thanks -smile- love Michael
Comment from seaglass
This delicate poem reads like a Psalm. Although the name Magdalene is popular now, I see this as being about Mary, Jesus' woman disciple. The movement in the picture is mesmerizing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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This delicate poem reads like a Psalm. Although the name Magdalene is popular now, I see this as being about Mary, Jesus' woman disciple. The movement in the picture is mesmerizing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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wow...thank you. what wonderful compliment. thanks...-smile- love Michael
Comment from c_lucas
Man has very few original thoughts, or original dance movements, but he is always willing to accept credit where credit is not due. Your post has very good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Man has very few original thoughts, or original dance movements, but he is always willing to accept credit where credit is not due. Your post has very good imagery.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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I see...-headtilt-...are trying to write like me Charlie...lol...ah thanks man. love Michael
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I write like me, Michael. You are an excellent poet. Charlie
Comment from LIJ Red
I read this twice and I want my funny money. What did I like about it? Words like
tracks in the snow, toes pointing every way, hiding the trail. What did I not like
about it? I never quite figured out if the trail went left or right. I sense that maybe
that was the plan. Oh, well, five for an interesting if futile read.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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I read this twice and I want my funny money. What did I like about it? Words like
tracks in the snow, toes pointing every way, hiding the trail. What did I not like
about it? I never quite figured out if the trail went left or right. I sense that maybe
that was the plan. Oh, well, five for an interesting if futile read.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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well LiL' when you grow up to be "Big Red" maybe it'll read better...lol...and its said futile is a middle fingers best friend. love Michael
