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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Azro Catter Chingtafeedz"These are fictional character sketches.
6 total reviews
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a fun poem to read and enjoy! I must confess that I do not understand the meaning of all of it, but that is quite beside the point. We need something light of FS now and then.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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This was a fun poem to read and enjoy! I must confess that I do not understand the meaning of all of it, but that is quite beside the point. We need something light of FS now and then.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Nicole, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from TallySally
Enjoyed the read aloud. Makes the ears laugh. Adult fun. Laughed like my grandkids laugh when I recite, Fuzzy.
But this is western sophisticated. Welcome sight and sound.
Relda
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Enjoyed the read aloud. Makes the ears laugh. Adult fun. Laughed like my grandkids laugh when I recite, Fuzzy.
But this is western sophisticated. Welcome sight and sound.
Relda
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Relda, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
What an imagination you have, Bob. I adore your end stanza lines:
while living in Dakota
or so the anecdota
which brings us to the coda
But dang, then I'd be missing all the fun stuff that lay between those lines. I love it when a poem says absolutely nothing, but satisfies a reader's need: to laugh uproariously, and hope no one asks him what he finds that's so dad-blamed funny!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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What an imagination you have, Bob. I adore your end stanza lines:
while living in Dakota
or so the anecdota
which brings us to the coda
But dang, then I'd be missing all the fun stuff that lay between those lines. I love it when a poem says absolutely nothing, but satisfies a reader's need: to laugh uproariously, and hope no one asks him what he finds that's so dad-blamed funny!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Jay, for the energetic and encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Cool! You really have a knack for nonsense names and fun poetry, Bill. I'm reviewing this even tho I have a rule about passing by two-centers. It was worth it! :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Cool! You really have a knack for nonsense names and fun poetry, Bill. I'm reviewing this even tho I have a rule about passing by two-centers. It was worth it! :)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thanks and sorry, Phyllis. Appreciate the kind review. I owe you a two-cent review. Bill
Comment from mvbrooks
cute, amusing, "short and sweet" story with a happy ending. Clever use of "coda" to finish the poem. On reading the title, I was apprehensive thinking the poem might be written in nonsensical language. The second line reveals it's a name and invites the reader deeper into the poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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cute, amusing, "short and sweet" story with a happy ending. Clever use of "coda" to finish the poem. On reading the title, I was apprehensive thinking the poem might be written in nonsensical language. The second line reveals it's a name and invites the reader deeper into the poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you, mv, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Serendipity!
I haven't read any of your writings before, but this is swell. I love the lively beat and humorous tone. Sounds like a good time to check out what else you come up with.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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I haven't read any of your writings before, but this is swell. I love the lively beat and humorous tone. Sounds like a good time to check out what else you come up with.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Marilyn, for giving this a look. Bill
