Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Promises"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from country ranch writer
people always make promises to get the people to do their bidding. Knowing damn good and well they have no intention in keeping them in the first place.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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people always make promises to get the people to do their bidding. Knowing damn good and well they have no intention in keeping them in the first place.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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Yeah buddy, snakes ain't the only things to crawl and snare. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating statements about this write.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You must have been busy today. This is the third piece of yours that I have read. I enjoy your writing as it is truthful and to the point. Good work
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Excellent. You must have been busy today. This is the third piece of yours that I have read. I enjoy your writing as it is truthful and to the point. Good work
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Glad to hear the view truthful and to the point. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts about my writes.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Well penned lines that capture the spiritual warfare swirling all around us -- felt but not always seen. Right now I think I need a break from the political scene. Line five -- shouldn't that be lying instead of lieing?
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Well penned lines that capture the spiritual warfare swirling all around us -- felt but not always seen. Right now I think I need a break from the political scene. Line five -- shouldn't that be lying instead of lieing?
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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The lye meaning soap and lie meaning be flat or falsely state to me are confusing, I will investigate your shout. Thanks for generous rate and touching statements.
Comment from Bill Schott
This stream-of-consciousness poem, Promises, seems to cover a lot of ground. Most seems to concern relationships with all kinds of people that are built over a definite dune of mistrust. Daunting read when looking for cohesive data.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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This stream-of-consciousness poem, Promises, seems to cover a lot of ground. Most seems to concern relationships with all kinds of people that are built over a definite dune of mistrust. Daunting read when looking for cohesive data.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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A real bummer hopeful revision removes some of the daunting finding that data. At least I hope. Thanking you for generous rate and touching statements disclosing.
Comment from Joyce Long
Well done.
Your title says it all "Promises." How many promises are things said but not done?
In your writing promises develop from a relationship to God. The promise of an enduring relationship, but something went wrong. Is there trust that the promises of God will be true? But, even with the promises of God, many people take on the thoughts of God.
Well done.
Joyce 10-23-15
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Well done.
Your title says it all "Promises." How many promises are things said but not done?
In your writing promises develop from a relationship to God. The promise of an enduring relationship, but something went wrong. Is there trust that the promises of God will be true? But, even with the promises of God, many people take on the thoughts of God.
Well done.
Joyce 10-23-15
Comment Written 23-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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The most serious of mankind's offences:
with the promises of God, many people take on the thoughts of God. Great insight with deep feelings. Touched. Thanking you for generous rate and delighting conveyances.
Comment from P1
they say promises are made to be broken
and in this case that is very true. well
written piece of poetry witha clear message
and it was my pleasure to read and review your
words thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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they say promises are made to be broken
and in this case that is very true. well
written piece of poetry witha clear message
and it was my pleasure to read and review your
words thanks for sharing
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Glad this work found appeal, appreciate your encouraging comments, and pleasing to me assurances of this work accomplished intents. Thanking you for such a generous rate and inspiring thoughts.
