For the Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Fluffy My Cat"This is going to be about my animals that I love
42 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. I love cats. Yours are lucky that you care so much for them. Your acrostic describes the faithfulness and joy Fluffy brings to you.
I would change one thing:
I would bold print the first letter of every line to make her name stand out
Fluffy is a very well loved cat
Loves me
Good job and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. I love cats. Yours are lucky that you care so much for them. Your acrostic describes the faithfulness and joy Fluffy brings to you.
I would change one thing:
I would bold print the first letter of every line to make her name stand out
Fluffy is a very well loved cat
Loves me
Good job and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review and the help. hugs, Teri
Comment from LeslieP5
This is a good acrostic poem that any cat lover will understand. Some say cats are aloof but this is not always so. When you relate to a cat and speak their language, I have found they relate to you. And some are very attached as your Fluffy, bringing their owner joy. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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This is a good acrostic poem that any cat lover will understand. Some say cats are aloof but this is not always so. When you relate to a cat and speak their language, I have found they relate to you. And some are very attached as your Fluffy, bringing their owner joy. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from MacMhuirich
Fluffy sounds like a big ball of fluffiness, nicely written Acrostic. Cats are fun bundles till you try to administer pills, then they become claws and teeth. Enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Fluffy sounds like a big ball of fluffiness, nicely written Acrostic. Cats are fun bundles till you try to administer pills, then they become claws and teeth. Enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you John and Bless you too. Teri
Comment from Just2Write
How appropriate for me to find your poem on cats. I found one of my neighbour's cats outside yesterday. He had eloped from his house while his peeps were away. He'd never been outside before, at least not on his own. Lucky for him and his owner, I had met the cat when his family had brought him home, and recognized him immediately. I returned him to his rightful house to a very thankful owner.
Your poem is very sweet, and was a pleasure to read.
Rose.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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How appropriate for me to find your poem on cats. I found one of my neighbour's cats outside yesterday. He had eloped from his house while his peeps were away. He'd never been outside before, at least not on his own. Lucky for him and his owner, I had met the cat when his family had brought him home, and recognized him immediately. I returned him to his rightful house to a very thankful owner.
Your poem is very sweet, and was a pleasure to read.
Rose.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you Rose for reading and reviewing it. hugs, Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
Teri,
So great to see you are still here on the site! I enjoyed reading this poem about your favorite cat. Fluffy seems to be the lucky one! While reading it I could picture
her there on your lap waiting for her snack.
Linda
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Teri,
So great to see you are still here on the site! I enjoyed reading this poem about your favorite cat. Fluffy seems to be the lucky one! While reading it I could picture
her there on your lap waiting for her snack.
Linda
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you Linda. It's great to see you again. Thanks for the review. hugs, Teri
Comment from Nosha17
She sounds like a very fluffy, cuddly cat. I am not a cat person, only ever had dogs, my two huskies were my pride and joy, they sadly passed away two years ago. Nice descriptions of your cat and how devoted she is. Well written acrostic. One thing, line 3, should be lying (laying is transitive, needs an object). Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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She sounds like a very fluffy, cuddly cat. I am not a cat person, only ever had dogs, my two huskies were my pride and joy, they sadly passed away two years ago. Nice descriptions of your cat and how devoted she is. Well written acrostic. One thing, line 3, should be lying (laying is transitive, needs an object). Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you Faye for reading and reviewing this. hugs, Teri
Comment from barkingdog
I enjoyed your acrostic about Fluffy.
Your have free verse as well as a rhyming couplet and then two more rhyming couplets(one with a near rhyme) in you final quatrain.
She sounds like a very devoted companion.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed your acrostic about Fluffy.
Your have free verse as well as a rhyming couplet and then two more rhyming couplets(one with a near rhyme) in you final quatrain.
She sounds like a very devoted companion.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from Sambangi
Great love for your Fluffy. The message is good. Our pets are our most trusted ones. People can cheat, pets can never. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Great love for your Fluffy. The message is good. Our pets are our most trusted ones. People can cheat, pets can never. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from royowen
Beautifully composed, Teri, about a delightful pet, your cat, we've had pets for years, cats and dogs, and all have been unique, all a blessing, they have given us so much joy. And you're right, very therapeutic. Well done, nicely composed my friend, a very fine entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Beautifully composed, Teri, about a delightful pet, your cat, we've had pets for years, cats and dogs, and all have been unique, all a blessing, they have given us so much joy. And you're right, very therapeutic. Well done, nicely composed my friend, a very fine entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you Roy as always. hugs, Teri
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Most welcome Teri,
Comment from c_lucas
Cats are notorious for their independent ways. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very sentimental read. Good imagery.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Cats are notorious for their independent ways. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very sentimental read. Good imagery.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you Charlie. Hugs, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. Charlie
